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Much reading this time, two chapters at once both very good in describing the love between Vivienne and Lucius flavoured with some Smut ;)
Very good writing I enjoyed reading it after just finishing HP Book 6 which is very sad in the end! It says there, Dumbledore would have enjoyed
more love in this world! Nothing more to add than keep on writing!

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Lukas

Nice Chapter 8, a little melancholic but that doesn\'t matter, that fits perfectly!
I was so surprised after Chapter 7, now Voldemort being dead that I thought Chapter 8 would have to be happy but it isn\'t,
Vivienne is sad because she lost her powerful ability! I hope you continue to write I am eager to find out how Vivienne handles being human, but please don\'t
kill her ;)
One word to all the flamers out there, try to write better stories or simply shut up!

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Lukas

I\'m glad Vivenne and Harry are alright. Great Chapter!

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Sammie Curls

Interesting Chapter with quite new and unexpected things happening! I can\'t wait to read on because I die to know what happens next after Voldemort ist dead!
You should continue write Harry Potter not Joanne!

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Lukas

A very interesting chapter. Can\'t wait to see what happens next. Hehe, I would be giggling to if Voldemort suggested turning me over to Lucius. What a wonderful \"torture\" that would be. I can\'t believe I have to wait that long for an update! :\'(

Love Always
Sammie Curls

Chapter 6 is again great and explains so many things that were unclear before, nevertheless I was surprised how fast Lucius accepted Dracos confession but the way he had to accept it because of Vivienne was outstanding!
Chapter 6 is a little like Book 6 of the actual book Harry Potter and the Half Blood Prince (that I am still reading) it explains many things!
But please I won\'t dare to compare your writing skills with that of JK Rowling you two are very different (at least concerning smut! Have I mentioned that I love this word?)
So Iam looking forward to Chapter 7, may it come soon.

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Lukas

I loved this chapter. It explained so much. I am very much flattered from your comment about your two reviewers. Since I am one of them, this comment goes to me and I\'m flattered. Blushing really. This chapter was longer which is good. I\'m happy. Can\'t wait for your next update!

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Sammie Curls

I have read Chapters 4 and 5 now and I was absolutely surprised how well you developed the story. I would call Chapter 5
\"The return of the Smut\" I love this word!
I want to know how it goes on I feel tension rising!
Please continue it is amazing to read and I want to know what a sephor is!

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Luke

Damn you chapters! I blame you for the shortness!!! ;) I could say this millions of times to you because you really are a wonderful author. This story is progressing very nicely. I cannot wait to read about Draco\'s upcoming conversation with Lucius. It can\'t really be a good sign. Oh, trust me, my boyfriend would much like to thank you for the fantasies this story has put into my head. He is especaially thankful for last night so he really wants you to keep up the good work with this story and will my head with more dirty fantasies. ;)

It\'s hard for me to review Fanfic, because this is the first time I actually read that kind of literature but I must say, that
this first time reading is more than positive because this story is written so well and I was surprised how smuty (Can you say that?)
it is. Chapters 1+2 surprised me, Chapter 3 makes me beg for more so please continue to write I am eager to find out more
about Vivienne and the Malfoys!
So hier ist die Review, sogar auf Englisch ;), damit es auch deine amerikanischen Freunde verstehen! db
Luke