rate_review Reviews

this is like really good i read all but the last chap on ff.net and am glad i found this one here, i\'m not sure if you\'ve posted it on ff.net but it\'s being a bitch and i can\'t log in so i\'m really happy i found it and again it\'s really good, but really sad
you said that there was an attack whatever thing where they lost alost of ppl how did they cover that up at hogwarts?

Wow, that was really bad. I don\'t want to be mean, but I couldn\'t even stand to finish it. It sounds like it could have a really interesting plot, but you need to really work on your writing skills. The spelling and grammar mistakes could easily be fixed by a beta, but your writing doesn\'t flow at all. Its not very oganized and you jump around a lot. The characters, Vernon in particular, were really ooc. I think you need a lot of practice. You are not totally a lost cause, because like I said the plot sounds interesting. But if I were you, I would definitely get a beta and maybe take some English clasees.

spell check please

Is English a second language or do you simply not know how to spell-check? Your opening chapter seemed good in premise and the rest of your story might be good, but I\'ll never know since I don\'t have the patience to wade through all those typos.

You know, you should write a back-story for this. It would be great to read about Harry\'s time as an assassin before his second year.

I do like this story, however you really should use spell check and a beta, there are so many typos in here its ridiculous!

What happened? What went wrong? Can\'t wait for chapter 13!

Intriguing. Can\'t wait for more!!

WOW!!! Amazing, I love it!!!!!!!!!!!! PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Wow! I\'m hooked! Can\'t wait for chapter 12!