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for The Family Jewels

by Mdunlap

person bob
schedule May 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oooo right on awesome story!
I like how Blaise and Draco both really want Hermione....ummmmm....can anyone say threesome? lol
keep up the awesome writing
-bob
person Bambu
schedule May 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I\'ve just read your first few chapters and am enjoying this story quite a bit. I was initially drawn in by the title... I couldn\'t tell if it was a parody or not. I quite like the lighthearted tone of teenaged life you managed to use while still giving some real depth to the issues confronting Blaise, Draco and Hermione. This fourth chapter, where Hermione is at once eager and reticence strikes such a very real sympathetic chord. I look forward to your next chapter.
person greer
schedule May 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM

Ugh torturous pace...but I must remind myself that it is a good thing. Keep it up!
person kazfeist
schedule May 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Lovely piece of work so far. I am not knowledgeable about the peerage system, but calling him Viscount didn\'t put me off at all. I don\'t really remember ANY mention in any of the books about Malfoy\'s actual standing, but I don\'t think it makes a hill of beans\' difference. The big issue is pure rather than mixed blood, isn\'t it? Anyway, I would appreciate an email with the title of your work in the subject line when you\'ve updated again. That\'s the one thing about FF.net that is nice: they have an alert system. Cheers!
person Serena
schedule May 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That\'s quite a nice piece of work so far and I really love the extremly fast updates!
I hope this will end into a threesome for Blaise, Draco and Hermione!
person Hanna Delacour
schedule May 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You have my undivided attention... great start so please update soon!!!!! I am interested in what kinda relationship that Hermione and Blaise have? hmmm....
person Maela
schedule May 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Nice start! I think that it\'s beginning with everyone on good terms from the beginning. Though I do hope you\'ll fill us in on how that came about. :)
person Anon
schedule May 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wots wit them callen her cara?
person CWolf
schedule May 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I loved the scene between Hermoine and Blaize. The dialogue in this is very clever and just plain fun to read. Excellent writting so far, I can\'t wait to see what happens next.
person TrixRStrange
schedule May 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Good FF so far, I like the plot. Can\'t wait to see how this all develops and goes.

Love, Hugs and Bludgers,

Trix ^_^