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for The Family Jewels

by Mdunlap

person Lyndie578
schedule May 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This chapter was quite sweet, between Draco\'s apology and Hermione/Blaise smut it was a real joy to read. I\'m looking forward to seeing what happens with the Malfoy Family Jewels. I wonder who will be the wearer and who will be the adorner of the jewels. Will Draco knowingly ask someone to where them or will someone mistakenly put them on? I\'m excited to find out.
person cat
schedule May 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love how this story is going- still one of my favorite Blaise characterizations. I can\'t wait for more Draco- the interaction between the three of them is great! Please keep updating- I am addicted.
person eve/roarke
schedule May 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Sorry didn\'t review other chapter, Holidays hubby and daughter home, the house is full,
the sun is shining sitting out on the patio eating a fresh roll and homemade jam while reading
your great story. Perfect.
Last chapter, was right its exactly what our Italian men do, Blaize would put a protection on her.
This chapter, its exactly what italian men do, very well. Great reading keep going you\'d never
know it was your first time. Every one uses that Tattoo, Inell\'s a genius, one of my favourite
writers.
Best wishes.
person merlyna
schedule May 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hi, Just wanted to let you know how much I\'m enjoying this story.... the boys are of course delicious... and the plot is interesting. I like stories that have Ron & Harry acting somewhat reasonably as they did in accepting Blaise for Hermione. Looking forward to more chapters.
person kazfeist
schedule May 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Nice job, again. Looking forward to finding out more about the jewels. Good pacing, according to my lights. Cheers!
person robin777
schedule May 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I liked the information about the jewels. I had a feeling that if Lucius didn\'t want Draco to have them then they must have been used for good. I can\'t wait to read about the party.
person mistigri
schedule May 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Have no fear your fic is very much appreciated. The low review rate is a common thing in fanfiction. Us avid readers/lazy reviewers depend on you splendid writers to embellish our days (and nights).
person Thisbe
schedule May 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I adore this story! Update soon and hurry up with some Blaise, Hermione and Draco action. *nudge*
schedule May 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Getting through it slowly. Emotinal blackmail from Hermione, just priceless. The foreign endearments from Blaize are perfect and I love the character you\'ve built for him. Hermione\'s confusion is very endearing. I\'ll read some more tormorrow.
Rain
person kazfeist
schedule May 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Fine couple of chapters, again. I think your pacing is just fine. Being an old married lady, I prefer quite a lot of plot with my, ahem, \"fun stuff\". Your characterizations are nicely done. Looking forward to more.