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for The Family Jewels

by Mdunlap

person lazy
schedule May 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
aw! yay! continue please!
person lovethelab
schedule May 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
A beautifully written chapter!
person Hanna Delacour
schedule May 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great couple of chapters.. I wouldn\'t worry about not having many reviews, 70 is alot on this site, most people just read and don\'t review. And 10,000 hits for a story as new as this one is alot, that means your readers are coming back for more :D As for the \"quiet ones\" that is actually a group and I don\'t think they would mind having another member. Keep up the great work. I will be reading, and reviewing!
person Lyndie578
schedule May 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
And the plot thickens! Awesome. It seems as though another ruby is about to be added. What about Blaise?
person Blazing Fire
schedule May 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I can be honest with you. I really love your story, I\'m just not good about reviewing stories. I can\'t critic with a damn. Your story is wonderful. So don\'t be offended if I don\'t review each chapter. I don\'t do it with most of the stories that I read.
person Dreamweaver
schedule May 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WOW, what a twist. I know I\'m going too far off into the future here but it would be hard for Hermione to wear that necklace as a sign of fidelety knowing that Blaise was going to be part of their lives too. Oh okay, I know I assume too much but it sure makes things interesting. I absolutely love that you made Sevvy Draco\'s godfather. It would certainly explain why he looked out for him over the years. And fancy a Malfoy having married a Gryffindor in the past (make that twice) LOL Loved that Dumbledore knew about the party too as well as Blaise\'s reputation for being rather flamboyant about them. Wonderful stuff, can\'t wait for more. :)
person Anon
schedule May 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I saw the note at the end of your last chapter and wanted you to know that \"your love\" couldn\'t be more wrong - I am loving every minute of this story and look often for updates (thank you btw for updating so frequently!). Keep up the great work, I look forward to the next chapter.
person Maela
schedule May 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
The lack of reviews is certainly not due to disinterest in the story. keep up the great work! :)
person Emilie
schedule May 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey, I am enjoying reading your story. I really like the interplay with Hermione, Blaise and Draco. I can\'t wait to read about Harry and Ron\'s reaction to Draco. I am very curious to exactly what is being sent to Draco on his birthday. Looking forward to reading later chapters.
person Kaye
schedule May 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
your story boring? are you crazy!?! i don\'t think so! this is an amazing story and i\'m thrilled that i just found it. so please update soon and keep up the great work.