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for The Family Jewels

by Mdunlap

person divine angel
schedule June 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow. Thank you :-)
person Hanna Delacour
schedule June 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Glad the jewels finally made a play in the story. I am dying to know how they will affect Draco, Hermione and Blaise. Is their a marriage in this stories future? Oh, I do love weddings, lol! Great work, keep it up!
person anonymous
schedule June 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Can\'t wait to read what happens next!!
person geo
schedule June 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
dude! I likey!!!! hehehe
person Daniela
schedule May 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
still loving it! i can\'t wait until there is more! although it looks like blaise isn\'t in love with hermione like draco is. If u got draco\'s love and blaise\'s (wat i like to call) \'Hermione Smarts\' then i think that would make a perfect person lol. named Dlaise. or Braco.
person robin777
schedule May 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter. I loved how Blaise has to keep explaining things to Draco. I\'ve always seen him as the peacekeeper between Draco and Hermione Can\'t wait to find out what he wished for
person Lyndie578
schedule May 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great plot progression, but I want to see what everyone does when Draco kisses Hermione in public. Please relay my request to your muse ;-) Thanks for the update!
person Fallenrose
schedule May 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I wonder if Draco\'s wish will come true?

I guess the only way i will find out is to keep reading more of your story

It was a quick update

I was glad when i saw Chapter 13 posted since i was looking forward to reading it

I guess if you wish for something enough it will happen, just like Draco!

Great Chapter Narcissa

Fallenrose
person kazfeist
schedule May 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Lovely chapter, again. I have, however, never heard of the Rochester game or \"drink the party foul\". Or maybe I have, but under a different name. Gave an interesting fillip to the party\' description, for me. Good work! Oh, you don\'t have to answer me here, either. Cheers!
person seren_witchblade
schedule May 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I\'ve enjoyed this story curious to see where it goes from here