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for The Family Jewels

by Mdunlap

person Anon
schedule June 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
fucking brilliant as always! update soon godamn you!
person bae
schedule June 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i think that so far this is turning out to be a great story. you can almost feel the emotions that hermiome is feeling because she is torn between the two of them. i love the way that you have blaise speak some italian, it makes the story that much better.
person Mallaidh
schedule June 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
absolutly fucking brilliant!
person Hanna Delacour
schedule June 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You should try jewel studded sheets in this fic, it would tie in well, I think I read about them somewhere else, perhaps in \"The Claiming of sleeping beauty\" series by Anne Rice. Nothing like a light spanking followed by rough sex on rough sheets.... just a suggestion. Can\'t wait to see what else you have in store for us.
person kazfeist
schedule June 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great so far....am really interested in some of the jewels\' backstory, though. Hope there\'s a great mystery afoot! Keep up the good work! I always liked the pairing of Pansy and Ron. Cheers...
person Lyndie578
schedule June 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I\'m quite intrigued by Draco\'s new note. How can Severus help him? What are the implications? Please post soon!
person Black_Jester
schedule June 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Amazing chapter this story is unbelievably good!
person Divine Angel
schedule June 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Still captivating. I\'m still hooked. I love Blaise, he\'s just the dreamiest fantasy guy! And I like the Ron moments too and how Harry was able to advise him about girls, that made me chuckle.

Of course, Hermione and various other characters turned 16 during OotP - age of consent in Britain :-p JKR has never been explicit about what 17 means in the wizarding world, my guess is she chose one age at which all adult privilages are bestowed, apparation, voting, drinking, sex. Much simpler that way.

Keep up the fabulous work!
person Dreamweaver
schedule June 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
It does indeed bring new meaning to the words. And to think only jewellry has been passed down in my family. (that I know of) LOL I should know better then to read before going to work but I can\'t help myself, the moment I see there\'s been a new chapter added I\'m right there in the middle of it (Oh how I wish I was) ;) Wonderfully sweet chapter, Blaise likes his romance so it seems and I love that he helped Ron out with Pansy even if itwas for Hermione\'s sake. Well done. Oh well, off to work to daydream. (sigh)
person Hanna Delacour
schedule June 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well... I couldn\'t imagine any Malfoy family Heirlooms not involving very strong, and perhaps somewhat dark magic. Who knows. Love the chapter. Try a collar. I\'m sure blaise and draco would make good time of a submissive Hermione.