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for The Family Jewels

by Mdunlap

person Hanna Delacour
schedule June 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Two great chapters, sorry I didn\'t review for the last one. I like the scene with Lucius. It gives the story some edge to it. Also the tidbits about Narcissa are proving to be very interesting and I anticipate more of a role from her in later chapters. Can\'t wait for the update!
person ~Kat~
schedule June 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Love it!!! can\'t wait till you update again!!!
schedule June 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for the update, loved reading about Ron and Pansy in this chapter, t was very sweet. I
person seren
schedule June 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I wait every day for the new chapters to appear. I\'m loving this story so much the dialogue and interactions are wonderful and it\'s can have so many possibilities. We pretty much know that hermione will end up with Draco but I\'m a fan of Blaise ( and taken the side of the debate that he character is a male even if J.K. does reveal the sex in the next book Blaise will always be a guy to me or a very butch lesbian hey different stroke ect.). Please keep posting daily it makes my night when theres a new chapter posted.
person eve/roarke
schedule June 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I\'m still trying desperately to work out why Lucius is so worried about the jewels,
still although I have a lot of questions I\'m thoroughly enjoying the story trying to
get some answers. Best wishes, update soon? hopefully.
person Seeker
schedule June 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You should make Blaise and Draco have sex right in front of hermione, seeing this is a fic about them. Very good work, I\'m loving it! ^_________________^ or you should have hermione ask them to did it! that would be funny. ^_^
schedule June 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Another lovely chapter, I
person ~Kat~
schedule June 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Damn this story is HOT!!!! This has got to be one of my favorites!!! I can\'t wait for more! I am sooo glad we finally got the slytherin sandwitch! I think the sexual peak for a which that lived to 150 would be at about 55 or so. Please update soon I love this story!
person eve/roarke
schedule June 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was a very hot chapter, you\'ve got the three coming closer towards
a proper triad, really enjoying it, Thank you for a good read.
Best wishes.
person Kat Murphy
schedule June 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Absolutely fabulous. I love it. It\'s well written, wonderful spelling and grammar, and I really enjoy the Ron/Pansy pairing. I also enjoy watching Ron get dating advice from Blaise-that was cute. The Blaise-Draco sandwich: yummy. And your Blaise has got to be the best Blaise I\'ve ever, ever seen.
Keep writing, and update as soon as you can. It really is a great story.
-Kat