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for The Family Jewels

by Mdunlap

person Anon
schedule June 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
...interesting chapter...Update soon! i love this story
person Anon
schedule June 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Freakin\' hot with an amazing plot.... A+
person heather
schedule June 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is an awesome fic! I\'m so glad that you update frequently, it makes my day! Great job and update soon!
person Natalie (natyslacks)
schedule June 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*Applauds* This is such a great story! And evern though the sex is very well written, still love the plot chapters, it gives flow to the story. I love this trio though, as it just makes me laugh at Hermiones dirty little secret. Plus I think the pairing of Ron and Pansy to be utterly adorable, because it takes a tender man to be able to draw out Pansy\'s sweet side ^.^
Please update soon, or when ever you can.
Luv Naty
person Lyndie578
schedule June 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for moving the story along. I didn\'t know that Mr. Zabini was so linguistically talented. I thought that Mr. (Draco) Malfoy was usually credited with that ability (smirking). I\'m glad that we are finally going to learn about the power of the jewelry. Then it won\'t be much longer till he gifts her with a piece. I wonder how that will all come--about. It\'s going to be quite dangerous and tempting to Draco to have direct access to the jewelery and wanting to gift Hermione or Blaise with a piece. I\'m looking forward to Hr/D/B talk.
person Hanna Delacour
schedule June 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Another great chapter... I really like Blaise\'s input on the diary. It will give him much more insight into the workings in future chapters.
person Divine Angel
schedule June 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I like the plot development, it\'s gripping! You\'ve done a fantastic job of balancing the plot with the sex so that it\'s titilating and engaging at the same time. Keep up the great work :-)
person seren
schedule June 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Love it love it the plot thickens and I\'m still hooked. I like the pansy/ron aspect never thought of those two as a couple please update soon I wait in anticipation for more installments.
person dragon34
schedule June 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
All I can say is, I love Draco/Hermione/Blaise, please more
person Anon
schedule June 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awesome story, I hope you continue it soon!