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for The Family Jewels

by Mdunlap

person Lrnd
schedule June 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Gasp! Nice cliffie
person Anon
schedule June 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Uh oh! Don\'t ruin this Draco. Please get along. :)
person Pixie
schedule June 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
What a stopping point for Chapter 28. Draco is going to go ballistic! Can\'t wait for the next chapter. Hopefully it\'ll be out soon.
person bob
schedule June 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oooooo.....I see a big cat fight is gonna insue.....I hope someone gets sent to the infermory....\'cause that would be pretty awesome.
Ok...whats really with harry? Does he \"want\" Hermione or something? \'cause it makes no sense if he does.
OOOO I\'m totally excited about the 16th....and everyone else should be too! HARRY POTTER THE 6th BOOK IS COMING OUT!!!!!
I fell out of my bed when I first heard.....and I heard awhile ago....I just want someone else to be as excited about this as I am!! :(
as always...UPDATE SOON!!!!
-bob
person Angel Eyes
schedule June 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
27 was really sweet. Thank you :)
person Anonymous
schedule June 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I enjoy this plot; it\'s an original idea. You\'ve given the characters a new sense of identity, and it\'s one that fits them pretty well.
The only problem I have with this story is that when the genitals come out, the pronouns run far, far away. What ever happened to the word \"I\"?
I think that the dialogue probably soudns different in your mind then they way it looks in text.
person Angel Eyes
schedule June 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh Wow Yay! Cliffy Ending! I\'m so glad you update pretty often! I cant wait to see what happens! And Hopefully the necklace won\'t make her give up Blaise completely, that would just be wrong. And hopefully Draco will tell Hermoine what all comes with wearing the necklece BEFORE he gives it to her. This is such a great story. I really, really love it. And thanks for turning it back to Hermoine, Draco, and Blaise.
person Dreamweaver
schedule June 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Mouth drops open in surprise. Closes and opens again several times. My goodness woman, that was quite the cliffhanger ending. I sure hope the next chapter isn\'t too far away. I love Ron\'s laid back attitude and it\'s nice to see. Harry on the other hand, not too sure what he was getting at or what he thought he was missing out on at first. I like how Draco took Ginny under his wing yet still let her know that things wouln\'t necessarily change greatly or too suddenly between them. It\'s amazing how cluey Ginny can be one minute and then miss something obvious the next but one tends to do that when emotionally close to someone. And ohhh the things going on in Draco\'s mind about how he feels about Blaise being around. Very on the edge of my seat stuff. In all a very exciting chapter.

Oh and please, please don\'t leave us hanging on this \'cliff\' for too long. LOL
person Lyndie578
schedule June 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I hope Hermione gets a chance to set the record straight before Harry and Draco start hexing eachother. Hexing would not be good for future relations. Thanks for the update!
person Chickenofpink
schedule June 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Noooooo! Evil cliffy!
This is so good. I just sat down today and read the first 28 chapters and now I want them all! Please continue with the excellent writing :D