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June 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I was very glad to see the Wicked reference (if that was what it was), and am going to continue reading this great story
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June 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
The woman Snape was with, was that Narcissa ? I love your work, you have a great imagination.
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June 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Aww that was sweet and now everyone is happy and giddy,lol
rock on!
rock on!
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June 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I haven\'t read a lot on AFF lately -- too busy writing -- but I stopped to go through this. The plot is solid, although there are a couple of smallish holes, including Hermione\'s willingness to so quickly agree to being with both of them, especially after being a virgin for so long, and also either I missed it or there\'s a missing orgasm when she and Draco get together for the first time.
Personally I\'m not a slash fan, but when it comes up in the process of the story itself as a natural extension -- as this slash did -- I don\'t mind it so much.
The sex is good as well, but the real devils are in the details. I love that Ron of all people is being the most adult about all of this.
If I have a real criticism, it\'s that everything is happening extremely quickly -- it\'s almost as if there are some transitions (ie: \"later that week\" et al) that have been overlooked. Still, I\'ll come back for more when I see this in the updated list. I am curious to see when Act Two will begin and the rising action will start... well... rising. The story has a lot of things that I do enjoy.
Personally I\'m not a slash fan, but when it comes up in the process of the story itself as a natural extension -- as this slash did -- I don\'t mind it so much.
The sex is good as well, but the real devils are in the details. I love that Ron of all people is being the most adult about all of this.
If I have a real criticism, it\'s that everything is happening extremely quickly -- it\'s almost as if there are some transitions (ie: \"later that week\" et al) that have been overlooked. Still, I\'ll come back for more when I see this in the updated list. I am curious to see when Act Two will begin and the rising action will start... well... rising. The story has a lot of things that I do enjoy.
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June 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ooooooo....and the plot thickens lol. is draco gonna get rid of blaise? the poor guy will be crushed. so how will the conflict with draco and harry go?
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June 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh this should be good, a pissed off draco is always so much fun! Can\'t wait for ze update!
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June 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh, it just keeps getting better and better. Thank you so much.
Look forward to the next update.
Look forward to the next update.
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June 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
How can I describe this story? Beautiful! Brilliant Clever and the list could go on forever.....
I can not believe I stopped reading it.
But I was bored and I gave it another shot and I am in love with this story .
Each chapter is better than the next.I swear the last few chapters brought tears to my eyes.
I can not wait for more. keep it coming
~SLYSWN~
I can not believe I stopped reading it.
But I was bored and I gave it another shot and I am in love with this story .
Each chapter is better than the next.I swear the last few chapters brought tears to my eyes.
I can not wait for more. keep it coming
~SLYSWN~
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June 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
very very naughty!!!
i will finish the rest tomorrow!
i love it lol!!! gotta love this threesome!
i will finish the rest tomorrow!
i love it lol!!! gotta love this threesome!
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June 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
AHH you left me hanging! This is such a good story please update as soon as possible!!!! PLEASE!!!!