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for The Family Jewels

by Mdunlap

person Maela
schedule July 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hmmm...interesting plot twist. I do wish the three of them would just confide in Severus though. He might be able to help them.
person angel eyes
schedule July 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
another great chapter
person Anon
schedule July 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love it I love it I love it. Your weaving such an amazing plotline. Very unique! Thank you!!
person cope
schedule July 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hmm, an intriguing development with Severus. i must say, well done on this. it\'s an incredibly original thought for a fic. Bravo. i hope to read more very soon.
your\'s truly,
cope

ps: thank you for reviewing my stuff. i agree with you on the Charlie/Hermione thing.
person elektrik_storm
schedule July 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i love it! i like the slash as well! update soon and i will review! snape and narcissa... nice!
person angel eyes
schedule June 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
good new chapter. i didnt expect them to work things out so easily but it makes sense and it was funny.
person bob
schedule June 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I honestly and truly think that that chapter was your best!
I loved the row between Harry and Draco...I thought that it would be picture perfect to see both Draco and Harry doubled over with pure unadulterd laughter...it would make me smile...and in fact, it did!
I wonder what Hermione will think of the fight that they had....or what they will do next.....ooo this could go very badly if the boys dont play their cards right.
I patiently await your next update! (even though it\'s more like impatiently)
-bob
person Dreamweaver
schedule June 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Cissa, that was beautifully handled. I\'ve always had a thought running around in my head that if Harry and Draco actually took the time to listen to eachother they might actually respect the other a little more. Not saying they ever have to be friends - but I like that they saw eachother with new eyes in this post. I imagine Ron\'s still going to give Harry heaps for endangering his sister as he saw it and I imagine Blaise shall be doing the same to Draco regarding Hermione. Very well done!! :) Oh and Sev, damnit, I want to know who this mysterious woman is and I only have two theories and you haven\'t tipped me in either direction. LOL Although that could be because I\'m wrong on both counts. Can\'t wait for more. :)
person Anon
schedule June 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Lovin\' this fanfic! You write so wonderfully~!
person Jianne
schedule June 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You are doing a fantastic job. I anxiously await more chapters each time. The sex scenes are perfect, dont let some anonymous fool tell you otherwise.