rate_review Reviews

At first when I started reading this story I thought it would be another pointless porn without plot, but as I read more it started developing into a great story. I\'m really glad you made the decision to write this, despite what others might say. I think you write sex scenes skillfully. They aren\'t overdone, or too romantic. I don\'t know what to do with heaving bosoms, and I for one am certainly glad you decided to not add them in. I think you\'ve kept the characters in character as much as you can, and I\'m glad you made Blaise male. He is one hunk of italian man that I would love to have. Promise me you\'ll continue to write this even if things in the HBP don\'t match up in your story. It\'s such a great plot, and I can\'t wait for the next chapter. Don\'t let those bastards discourage you. Happy Writings.

Another great chapter. I like how you\'re weaving everything together. The next couple of chapters should be really exciting with the discovery they made.

What an enchanting fanfic. Thoughtful, wonderful. :)

no damnit. that was short. lol nice to see everyone talking and well almost everyone anyway.

Oooh, this is so exciting! More please!

oooooo this is getting GOOOOOOOOD!!!!
I\'m totally excited for where you are gonna take this story...this is one of my tops...if I knew anyone else that reads AFF I would tell them all about your story....but I dont....damn......*sigh*
Oh shit! Malfoy Sr. is gonna go nuts!!! He\'s totally gonna get someone from Draco that he cares about.....this is one of those times where the other death eaters can get one of the golden trio for their own means, but not for Voldy\'s means huh? Dont you hate that?....well if your gonna do that, then I\'m sure you\'ll make it work...your awesome like that!
oooo....I\'m not sure how you can get your kids to be quiet other than hitting them over the head with a 2X4.....but you could tire them out....like make activities for the whole day...and then when it\'s bed time...they are out like a light! :D
Or you could do like my irish buddy and put a little whiskey in their milk or night drinks...*shrugs*.......I\'d advise against the whiskey....try the 2X4 first :D
UPDATE SOON!!!
-bob

::ROFL:: Hermione, mother them! \"Yes Dear.\" Oh good grief I\'m going to be fit to be tied when this is over, these little moments are great! Keep it uP!

very nice chapter, it made up for the waiting :).

this is a really interesting twist! I hope they can keep Draco safe. for whom did the \"stranger\" buy the potion to poison? i assume they intend to poison or otherwise hurt someone with the malignant concoction. I hope it is no our house-uniting trio! Please update soon!

I love your story so far read it in 2 days... I can\'t believe you placed a historical figure in the story pretty interesting having the King of the Holy Roman Empire invovled. Oober Dober! Update Soon keep up the your flippin awesome job!

Ana