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for The Family Jewels

by Mdunlap

person Angel Eyes
schedule July 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Another great chapter. I really like this story.
person slyswn
schedule July 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
another fine chapter indeed
person dragon34
schedule July 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
What does that scoundrel have planned ?
person Anon
schedule July 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Haven\'t read this in awhile..oh man is it getting exciting!! Please write more soon!
person Spacey
schedule July 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey!
I\'ve been reading our story for ages trying to catch up to where you\'ve written to! I thought that it was well past due that I left you a review telling you how wonderful I think that your story is! You\'ve created great balance in your characters and they all have the essence of their cannon counterparts. I love the development of Ron... it is great to see him evoving into a, well for the lack of a better word, man. The relationship between Draco, Hermione and Blaise is well written and sounds quite natural and the complications that they face are realistic. Great job with the story I am enjoying reading it and look forward to more. Keep up the great work!
Spacey
person meoki
schedule July 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
omg! i love the story i couldn\'t stop reading it! most of the time i\'m strictly a hermoine and severus pairing fan! but a friend recommened ur work and i was curois and i love the way you\'ve charatarised zabini i love it keep writing and updating!
person Dreamweaver
schedule July 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I had a feeling when I saw you had posted a review elsewhere that there was a chance that you had updated and I\'m so pleased it was true. :) I adore your portrayal of Blaise. Silently clever, always thinking about the future but still living in the present. Worried yet keeping things to himself, ever the gallant protector even though he\'s not sure what he\'s protecting them from. Once more I find myself wishing I was Hermione. LMAO And I do worry just how much Crabbe and Goyle will obey Lucius. They\'ve been faithful guardians to Draco for so long he\'d hardly expect them to turn on him. Looking forward to more as always. :)
person Nova
schedule July 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ohohhohoh! The tension is growing! Lovin it! Lovin It! Keep it up! Hehehe!
schedule July 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey, I have found you story and I must say I love it. The drama and feelings and the action. I like Sev\'s role and I love the Draco/Hermione/Blaise relationship. Lucius always makes me want to hit somthing, preferable him and I think that makes a good story. I never believed in Lucius becaoming a good guy, so this is perfect. I love the way the story has evolved and moves along it has made some truly great reading. I shall be following along from now, it is excellent. - Laurels
person Met
schedule July 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is an awsome fic...i love it so much. your racy ideas and thick plotline make the story flow, very well together...thank you for writing this story