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for The Family Jewels

by Mdunlap

person Lyndie578
schedule July 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for working so diligently on this story to get it to this point. I\'m sure you\'re a little worried about what may happen in HBP, but I don\'t think that JKR will knock off one of your principals till Book 7, if ever. Blaise would probably be the only one in danger since he is not really a major canon character. I look forward to your next offering (whenever that may be). You\'ve left me wondering if Lucius will go for the Family Jewels, which are forbidden to him, or Hermione, who is forbidden to him. Thank you, again, for the post!
person Alexia
schedule July 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awsome! That was another amazing Chapter! Love Blaise and Draco action lol. Normally I\'m more of a snape fan but your fic is just way to good! Email me anytime and I\'ll whip up a banner for yea!
person Leli
schedule July 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Let me just start by saying your story is one of the few things keeping me sane this last month! So, I thank you for that.

Now I don\'t know who I want to win in the upcoming Slytherin/Gryffindor match ;) each side of the bets would play out very interesting... however I think I\'m more interested in what Blasie wants to give Hermione so I\'ll be waving my Slytherin flag as I read that chapter.

The story is so interesting that I\'ve never had any smut withdrawal once while reading your story.
person tubbles14
schedule July 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I absolutely adore this story!! I\'m sorry I haven\'t reviewed before now. I can\'t wait too see what happens with the quidditch match! I also really appreciate it that you update regularly and in a timely fashion too....*sigh* my hero

Anyways, good luck with the story and everything else in your life!
tubbles
person Nova
schedule July 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Bets, bets, bets all around! ROFL!
person Anon
schedule July 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Interesting... I\'m worried about poor Draco. I really love Draco and Hermione together. They just seem so perfect for each other. Blaise is fine too ;) But Draco and Hermione...awww
person KageMage15
schedule July 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oh my gawd, guys are so complex. and yes you have been to sublt with the way this storying going to go. print it out in big bold letters or else i\'ll never get it.
person Kismet
schedule July 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hi, I apologize for my poor english, I\'m italian. Your fic is really good, maybe you could just want to correct some italian expressions you wrote.
Here are the correct translations: I want you so much = Ti voglio cos
person rogue87
schedule July 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
very well written, i don\'t think i\'ve ever read a better fanfic
person me
schedule July 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
update soon plzzzzzzzzzz