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for The Family Jewels

by Mdunlap

person Petalsoft
schedule July 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow! That last chappie was hotttttt. I\'m very curious to see what Lucius will do now that he resembles Draco. Your story is very sexy, interesting and well written. I can\'t wait to read more even though I completely understand your need to get immersed in Book Six. I\'ll be doing the same! LOL

Also - that is creepy that someone could add a chapter to your story! I hope they make this website more secure. You should send a e-mail to Ayla and let her know what happened. Anyways, have fun reading Half Blood Prince! (Wonder if it will be Blaise????)
person Petalsoft
schedule July 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I\'m finally trying to catch up on my reading! Sorry I\'ve been so lax. I love this story a lot! I\'m up to Chapter 18 now. God was that a hot one! Woo! If I was Hermione, I\'d die from pleasure. The way Blaise was teasing her - oh yeah. Well, I\'m off to read Chapter 19 before I hit the sack and I\'ll be reading more tomorrow. Just wish Blaisie and Draco were in my bed! LOL
person Petalsoft
schedule July 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Now up to Chapter 20! I really love the relationship you have going between Ron and Pansy, it\'s very sweet. And the mystery of the jewels... hmmm I better read further
person Petalsoft
schedule July 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Just finished chapter 22. pant pant I\'m so glad you add slash! That was sooooo hot. I loved Harry reaction to the ritual as well. You have done a wonderful job with this story. I love the bit of history you gave on the jewels as well. I\'ll continue reading this tomorrow, as it\'s now 1 am. sigh.... I\'ll have sweet dreams after that chappie.
person Kymmy
schedule July 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well, all I can say is that I REALLY hope that you read fast!! if you are determined not to update this FAB story until you finish HBP. Besides.... surely you could get one more update done before midnight tomorrow??? ;-) Are you really going to leave us hanging here? I guess you are.... I look for updates to this story every morning before I get working, and I will continue to look forward as soon as you can get back to it. You are a gifted writer and \'plotess\' (goddess with plot, get it?). Can\'t wait to see where you take the story from here, and how!
person Dreamweaver
schedule July 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Brilliant as always, \'Cissa. I love reading this story. I think I even held my breath when Blaise started walking toward Mandie - I did rather like his punishment though. :) And then still wanting more when they were done with him. Maybe that\'s why I enjoy Blaise so much? ;) Look forward to reading more story once you\'re ready to post more.

Didn\'t notice the other post earlier. Bit rough if someone\'s figured out your codes. Make sure you keep an eye on that and they don\'t delete your story on you.
person Anon
schedule July 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hot. But now I\'m worried about Hermione!
person Sommer
schedule July 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great Story.
Poor Hermione, they are leaving her out.
person angel eyes
schedule July 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
great chappie. i cant wait for HBP either.
person KageMage15
schedule July 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Damn Draco\'s dads an ass you know that? I can only think of the things he\'s going to do. What did Blaise mean, why is no one touching me?