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for The Family Jewels

by Mdunlap

person Shai
schedule July 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
okay, so I\'ve finally caught up on this. Jeez, someone hacked in? Freak-y. Anyway, I\'m glad you\'re not going to change the story any from 6, though of this is 7 so.., any way, I have a selfish request; it\'s going to be a while I can get my hands on 6 and so I\'m going to need to be avoiding spilers for awhile. Selfishl, please don\'t spoil in the disclaimer or anything, with those comments that you make, comments I miss by the way.

Anyway, your story\'s terrific, you know it! Looking forward to more.
person lola
schedule July 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love this story! I think your a great writer and I\'m so glad that you update so often!
person angel eyes
schedule July 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I have a sinking feeling that Lucious is going to go attack Hermione as Draco. I wish you wouldn\'t put it in but I understand the draw of that much drama and conflict and it is very Lucious. Hopefully if you do decide to do it though Hermione can figure out what\'s going on and stop him or the real Draco or Blaise can come back. But with Draco at the game and Blaise asleep that doesn\'t seem like a likely option.
person lazy
schedule July 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
eep! wow i like this! countinue please!
person Firered
schedule July 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This right after reading chapter 29. When Harry and Malfoy wre pulling wands, and then Ron and Blaise broke it up, in between that time, and a good bit after, what the HELL was in Hermoine and Ginny\'s minds? Stepford wives syndrom? I\'m-just-a-dumb-poor-woman-andI-must-hide-behind-my-boyfreind-and-freind etc.-while-they-attempt-hex-eachother-off-until-two-other-guys-in-the-equation-come-and-take-care-of-things-because-poor-dumb-me-doesn\'t-have-a-wand/doesn\'t-know-how-to-do-one-of-thebasic-spells-learned-much-in-the-fight-for-voldemort syndrome? What the fuck was in your head then?




By the way, on other things, I love your story, was planning to read the whole 35 chapters and counting before I reveiwed but then there was this and I didn\'t want to imply that I don\'t like this story, I like it a lot, but hell, I did read almost thirthy chapters so far, huh? And counting.
person aCharmedOne
schedule July 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh I think I can see Lucius intentions now, and it dosen\'t look to good for our favorit pair a threesome. I hope you will finish reading HBP soon. I realy like your Story. I found it just Yesterday evening and read it in one go.

I\'m eager to learn more about the other jewels.

Bye aCharmedOne
person elle6778
schedule July 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This story got me entranced for pretty much the whole day! I loved it! Thanks for sharing!
person heather
schedule July 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awesome chapters! I havent reveiwed in a while becuase my computer wasnt working and I can\'t read this on my parents\' computer. Great updates and I totally understand about finishing HBP before updating more, I am buying the book tomorrow and can\'t wait to read it!
person Petalsoft
schedule July 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I\'ve been reading more of the story today and I have to say that it\'s fantastic. Your sex scenes are hot hot hot. I also love the way you are handling the reactions of the other students to the threesome. It was fun to see Harry and Draco really be able to laugh together. Well... back to reading more. Your story is holding me over until Book six comes out tomorrow!
person Tasha
schedule July 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
yo this story is off the hook. you are an excellent writer and story teller. i cant wait til the next chapter is up and that is fucked up i wonder why would somebody go and do that to you. it your story other ppl shouldnt fuck wit it.