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for The Family Jewels

by Mdunlap

person Lyndie578
schedule July 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for the update! Sorry about the trouble at home.

Where is Hermione? It\'s kind of creepy that we have not seen her or Lucius for over an hour! Eeek, please encourage your muse! I want to know what has happened!
person <>
schedule July 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
URG!

update quickly
person krazykiwi
schedule July 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
another cliff hanger! still as good as ever, please continue shortly!
person Petalsoft
schedule July 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
First off, sorry about your pet. I know that\'s difficult.

I just checked into the Hermione/Draco section and noticed you had posted two more chapters! Yeah! And very exciting ones as well. Blaise must be upset about thinking Draco had ordered Tweedle Dee and Tweedle Dum to do the truth serem on him. Hope he believes the real Draco\'s story. And I definately want to know what Lucius did with Hermione so please update soon. Great cliffhanger btw.
person Dreamweaver
schedule July 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Huggles for the loss of your pet. I\'m very sorry to hear that.

As for the chapter, nicely done. I was right up there zigging and zagging in the game. Will be interesting to see how the rest of the teams fare now that Slytherin have won. It worked out nicely (or wickedly - LOL) that Draco \'owns\' Harry but defers it for Hermione. (for the time being) Harry would be too concerned with her welfare to care about the bet at the moment. (I do rather like the idea of Harry and Draco working together on something, they\'ll never be friends, but I like that there\'s a chance they\'ll finally respect eachother a little better here) I\'m glad that Blaise\'s suspicions were dealt with quickly and that Draco easily proved he wasn\'t the \'Draco\' that had set Blaise up. I don\'t like to think of them as enemies. And finally what the bloody hell has happened to Hermione and what else did Lucius take off with. Great cliffy to end on. Look forward to more. :)
person Anon
schedule July 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG!! If that isn\'t an evil cliffie, I don\'t know what is! Please update soon!
person Anon
schedule July 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh! A new chapter. More more more!
person Stephanie
schedule July 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh come on! darn it! i wanted harry to win! oh well...... great story!
person KageMage15
schedule July 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OH MY GAWD THOSE STUPID, STUPID ARGHHH THERE ARE NO WORDS FOR THEM. I hope everyone going to be ok. I swear this look so bad. anyway UPDATE so i can know what the hell\'s happening.
person Sugar Sprite
schedule July 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
HOLY SHIT!!! lucius is a freaking mother fucker!!! freaking ugly ass FREAK!! okay then, done commenting on that pig... wonderful couple of chapters!! gotta go, update soon!