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for The Family Jewels

by Mdunlap

person Dreamweaver
schedule July 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I\'m no expert on gentics and bloodwork but I imagine there will be similar properties in the blood of both Draco and his father but I\'m sure the aurors will have a spell that can identify between the two. Typical of Harry to want to charge in and do something. He never seems to want to sit back and think first. I guess he has too many emotions running through him to calmly thinki things through. And poor Blaise feeling so guilty. I\'m glad Dumbledore knew to say the right thing. For a moment there I thought Narcissa was going to give Snape a kiss too. LOL

We\'re nearly done? Oh no. I don\'t want this to end. :( I\'m enjoying it way too much.
person KageMage15
schedule July 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
but whouldnt he have needed a free hand to open her mouth, open the potion and to have givin it to her? um vey happy to see that you updated again ^___^ and thats it
person Divine Angel
schedule July 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great couple of chapters. The quidditch was really well written as was Lucius taking Hermione. Tactfully done, poor Hermione. I loved Draco and Harry flying from the pitch like that, I wonder what their teams and the crowd were thinking?!

As for your disclaimer, I prefer female singers (and am female) and hardly know any guys who feel likewise. It happens that I probably listen to more male singers because their are a lot more of them though! Most men I know listen to bands with male singers, although I do know one guy (who is straight, just for reference) who loves the same females as I do; Tori Amos, Fiona Apple, Ani Difranco etc. and the band Queen Adreena. But he is pretty much the only guy I know who does listen to female singers in preference over males.
person carabella
schedule July 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oh man this story is soooo good. i look for updates every day. please, please, please don\'t let lucius win, or too much mental scarring to happen to hermione...or physical scarring for that matter. hey! maybe you can have narcissa save her, that\'d be a nice twist! :)
person Hanna Delacour
schedule July 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I haven\'t had much time to read or review lately, but I have made time to at least read your fic. I just wanted to say that it is wonderful as usual. I can\'t wait to see what happens now that lucius has hermione. Draco and Blaise to the rescue!
person KageMage15
schedule July 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That bullshit. Total and complet B-U-L-L-S-H-I-T! I had to get that out now what I\'m accusing is bullshit is the fact that Hermione didnt even try to hex him when she realized who he was. I mean come on her wand had to be somewhere around even if she was sleeping. Especailly if she knew Draco\'s dad was going to try something. Other than that cool. and update soon
person Dreamweaver
schedule July 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I almost feel sorry for Lucius. When Hermione gets her wand back she is going to make him pay severely for what he\'s done. And I\'ve no doubt Draco and Lucius will finish off the pieces. Brilliant job of Lucius\' taking of Hermione - I can imagine him using Draco\'s body as such to punish her. I\'m glad she realised who he was but I can imagine she\'ll have a hard time trusting Draco for a while just the same - wondering if it\'s really him so to speak. But having said that, I\'m already imaging what a wonderful job of comforting Hermione that Draco and Blaise shall do. Jealous much. LMAO
person notoriousmarm
schedule July 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
good. bad of course. but good..
person kazfeist
schedule July 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Last two chapters weren\'t too frightening...hopefully the boys can get her before any real damage is done. Great plot cliffhanger as usual, and condolences on your loss. We had to put our four pets which we\'d had since before the kids were born to sleep last year. All were extremely old, in renal failure, and suffering from arthritis in every joint. It was a blessing for them, I am sure, but it was really hard on us in the vet\'s office, as we had to hold them while they passed away. Hope yours went more quickly. Looking for more chapters soon....
person KrazyKiwi
schedule July 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I can\'t wait to see what happens next, such a cliffhanger!