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for The Family Jewels

by Mdunlap

person LoveSpell
schedule August 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Your story is just fine. It\'s great and I\'m enjoying it. Keep it going!
schedule August 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I just cant tell you how much I love this story, I look forward to another chapter to read every morning! Keep it coming, im so anxious to find out how it ends! + Thank you very much for reviewing my story, its greatly appreciated xx
person Kate
schedule August 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Eh, what can you do? Tom is a young 17 year old. He doesn\'t know what his talking about, plus he has become a very popular actor. Let\'s just say he\'s not living in the real world. I for one hope he doesn\'t do Fishery Management. That is completely ridiculous, and I would have to send his mother a letter about it. Anyway, about the story, I\'ve been a dedicated reader and haven\'t found time to review for the past 44 chapters. I\'m really happy with what\'s going on in this story, however I think you\'re not equaling the love between Blaise and Draco. It feels to me that you\'re leaning more towards Blaise with Hermione. Now, I know everyone loves the Italian version of Blaise, but if you\'re going to put it in Draco/Hermione catagorizing could you atleast let Draco have a little more loving from Hermione? It just feels like he is distanced from the couple. So, with that said, I can\'t wait for the next update. My only request is no killing Draco or Blaise. :D Happy Writings.
person Dreamweaver
schedule August 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Lovely chapter, Blaise is certainly oldworldly - defending his loves\' honours. :) I do wonder why Narcissa was so quiet. And did I mention how much I\'m looking forward to their party? Hope Voldemort doesn\'t decide to gate crash although it sure would make things interesting. LOL
person Petalsoft
schedule August 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Glad to see that Harry enjoyed hearing that little romp. LOL Good chapter.
person lazy
schedule August 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hey! yay! continue please!
person Master Paprika
schedule August 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This story is so cute! I absolutely love it! The smut is amazing, too. This is my fave threesome pairing EVER and I love that this story is turning out so well! I can\'t wait for more!
person Cac
schedule August 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Whoa, three new chapters! Excellant as usual, and no, sorry, I\'m too empty-headed to think of anything for the final battle - though hey, no sacrafices please, no tragic deathes of good characters heroicly throughing themselves in front of a killing curse to save another. Then again, that sounds exactly like what Lucius would do to save Hermione - yes, that sounds inevitable, and Blaise will have to deal without personal revenge cause you don\'t always get what you want.
person Mya
schedule August 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Aww, Hermione\'s got it made... a little short but loved it none the less... can\'t wait for more..
person skg
schedule August 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love Blaise....I am so torn who Hermione should be with....