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for The Family Jewels

by Mdunlap

person heather
schedule August 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love this story! You are wonderful about updating quickly, which as a fellow author I know is very difficult! I can\'t wait to read more, this is one of my favorite stories! Wonderful writing, you have a real talent!
person saytheya
schedule August 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I hope you don\'t end the story soon!! you have to keep writing or at least write more about the jewels. now hermione, blaise, and draco can enjoy time all to themselves. so you\'ll have to make them spend lots of time with each other.
person angel
schedule August 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
this is a great story i love it and i canr wait in till you update next .... man the thing they had to do and the thing that were dont to them .... man i hope all goes well and i hope snape marry narcissa so they dont have to hide their love ... well in till next time later

angel
person Sugar Sprite
schedule August 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG, Ol\' Voldie is DEAD!! All REJOICE!, or at least, you know, Cheer ? anyways, great couple of chapters that was... and I can\'t believe that Hermione was able to do that to Lucius!! YAY!

so bottom line is : I LOVE THIS STORY... and it\'s great.

so i hope you update soon! Until then,

Cheers :)
person Mya
schedule August 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow, what a chapter... just about sums it all up with Voldemort... crazy... poor hermione... can\'t wait to see where u take it from here.
person JTBJAB
schedule August 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh man you have got to update! This story is amazing, I just read the whole thing through!

I am speachless, and so I apologise for not having a better review, but it was so good!

Please update as soon as possible!
person Petalsoft
schedule August 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Aww, great last lines. I also loved \"Voldemort was fucking dead.\" I don\'t know why, but it made it laugh. That was a great chapter and I\'m happy to see everything turn out. So is there some happily ever after sex coming up???? I hope so. LOL Good job.
person Dreamweaver
schedule August 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I said you\'d make me feel like I was right in the room with them and you did exactly that. Bravo for a wonderfully descriptive, action-packed chapter. I love that Harry and Draco stood shoulder to shoulder bound by a common goal and although it was Harry that fulfilled the prophesy - they gained a certain respect for eachother just the same. All I can say now is bring on the party (as soon as I finish grovelling at your feet) LMAO.
person lydia
schedule August 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
is this a draco and blaise story with hermione ?
person Bob Saget
schedule August 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love that...