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for The Family Jewels

by Mdunlap

person Dreamweaver
schedule August 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful chapter. How delicious that there\'s more then one Zabini boy. LMAO. Loved the insight into Ron\'s thoughts and the whole Ron/Pansy conversation - very sweet. Most of all, I loved Bill\'s teasing offer to escort the Zabini sisters around London and the Zabini brother\'s consequent reactions. LOL Well done!

I hope things ae getting better in your own little corner of the world too. :)
person Threesisters
schedule August 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Just Brilliant! Loved Ron waking up.
person cat
schedule August 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful as always. I can\'t get enough of the Zabini family- even just mentioning them makes Blaise that much more sexily dangerous and powerful. It\'s definitely good.
person tonkatrish
schedule August 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh, I am so stuck on your writings!!! TY!!
person V.
schedule August 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You\'re a trooper. Thanks for the update. Sorry about what you went through. That really, really sucks. Posting again this soon - you really must have tremendous energy!
person JTBJAB
schedule August 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Aw thank you for that lovely chapter, and I hope you are feeling better over what happened!

I look forward to your next chapter whenever it happens to pop up!
person Anon
schedule August 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Aw. I love your Pansy.

I hope Blaise is alright. :(
person Bob Saget
schedule August 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I FUCKING LOVE YOU AND YOUR AMAZING STORY!!! YOU ARE MY HERO AND YOU NEED TO UPDATE SOON!!! I AM LEFT WONDERING IF ALL IS WELL, AND THAT IS NOT RIGHT!!!
person Hanna Delacour
schedule August 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I do hope you have gotten things sorted out and that life has returned to normal... if there is a normal. Another great chapter... It\'s nice to see families come together and prejudice die in moments of mutual dispair. Strange isn\'t it?
person Dreamweaver
schedule August 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Good to see you are keeping your chin up. :) And yes there is good in the world and you are one of them. Wonderful chapter. I liked when Blaise and Ron\'s mothers embraced eachother - lovely touch. And I\'m glad Pansy got to be there for Ron too. I\'m sure he won\'t complain about waking up and seeing her there. Still not sure what Percy will do as yet but I agree, mother\'s always hold out hope for their kids no matter what they do.