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for The Family Jewels

by Mdunlap

person ~Sakurashope7~
schedule August 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
As I said before I would like Hermione to get together with either Draco or Blaise (preferably Blaise) but you are the author and I know that you will make the write *haha* descision......^_^
person Anon
schedule August 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I never want this story to end...but I am dying between updates.
person Pam
schedule August 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I have read this story about 3 times already, and I love it. I look forward to reading your next post. Keep up the great work, and please post again soon. Thanks.
person ck
schedule August 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
It\'s still going great, fantastic really (not that any of your readers are suprized). I\'m sad to hear (read) that you\'re trying to tie it up a bit. Remember though, you still owe all of your diligent readers a bit of Mr. Malfoy (junior) payback. I won\'t forget how in A Girl\'s Best Friend (one of my favourite chapters by far) Hermione promises Draco that he\'ll have those clamps on too. I\'m really looking foward to that!!!!!!
;) ;) On the story as a whole, I find that it has continued to stay as excellently developed through and through. The characters stay fluid in every single chapter, a feat which many fan fic authors cannot achieve. You\'re one of my two favourite writers her, bluemidget is the other. if you havn\'t read pany\'s volcano you need to. Thanks also for the amazing speed at which you update. You\'re kick ass, and write tantalizingly steamy, I-wish-I-was-in-the-middle-of-that, hotter then hell sex scenes. You Rock! ck

Sorry also I haven\'t reviewed before.... I have no excuse, but hopefully this long one makes up for that... ck
person EmZ
schedule August 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
how off colour is off colour?
person Dreamweaver
schedule August 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I agree totally in regards to the ex-sex. I was amused to read that part. I loved Ron and Pansy\'s engagement, it was such a heartfelt proposal from Ron and brought a tear to my eye (damn you! LOL) Poor Pansy, I was so sad to read her initial reaction and thinking Ron didn\'t want to be with her anymore. I loved everyone\'s reaction to their news too but nothing was so touching as the moment Ginny went over and hugged Harry knowing there was nothing more she could do then just be there for him. Just beautiful. :) As for your ending, I\'ll be sad knowing it\'s the last post but I know I will love whatever you write, however you write it.

By the way, thank you for the wonderful review you gave me. I\'m so flattered you think so highly of it, especially since you do such wonderful work yourself. :)
person angel
schedule August 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
keep going i love it and how it is going please keep up the great wor and i cant wait in till you next update this is the best story i have read yet and when you get done with it i going to reread it i love it ..... well later in till next time

angel
person JTBJAB
schedule August 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh man! It\'s almost over! *sob* Is Hermione going to have to choose between Draco and Blaise?

I don\'t even know who I want her to choose.....I mean Draco has those jewels, but he can be rash and Blaise is so romantic and sweet and thoughtful....oh crap! Lol! Maybe she can stay with both of them....can she do that? I mean will Blaise\'s family approve?

Please update soon, so many questions and only future chapters can answer them!

Oh and please have a nice, happy ending - please write something with the thought of a Sequel unless you plan to do one (it\'s amazing how many authors have done that, not finishing a story because of a supposed sequel that never happens!) It will be much appreciated!!!

Thank you for this chapter, and well done with you writing!
person kazfeist
schedule August 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well, I, for one, am a sappy romantic...I get far too little of that kind of nice, neat ending in real life! Heck, that\'s why I\'m readin\' this stuff, anyways! But anything you dream up will do, dear. Cheers!
person Dreamweaver
schedule August 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ex-sex. LMAO - Poor Bill. Wonderful stuff once again. I love how Blaise\' mother is so like Molly, bringing all the children in and making sure they\'re fed etc. I shall be very sad when this story ends. I hope you have plans for more soon.:)