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for The Family Jewels

by Mdunlap

person Sommer
schedule September 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love ths story.
I think it\'s just fine in the draco and hermione section.
I wouldn\'t move it
person Phantasia
schedule September 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really enjoyed your story. I hope to read more of your stories.

Phantasia
person JTBJAB
schedule September 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
No you should not move it out of Draco/Hermione section, because it is about a relationship between those two, there just happens to be a bit of Blaise in there too!!!

Just like in Snape/Hermione, there are stories where Hermione doesn\'t even get with him, Severus just happens to play a big role in the story!!!

So ignore the grumbles, and leave it where it is.... although I do think there could be a sequel!!!! *hint hint* =p
person angel
schedule September 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i love it... but you left it with a bit ofa cliff hanger but i still love is and i cant waitin till you make a new story so in till then keep up on the great work and later for now

angel
person alicat999
schedule September 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
No! No! dont move it!...I never would have found it if it hadnt have been in the DM/HG section, and seeing as how there isnt a DM/HG/BZ..or even a BZ section...I just wish more people would post their triad fic\'s here so they were easily found...I mean if the author says what it is I couldnt see there being a problem..right?
person Tygerlily
schedule September 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Fabulous ending, I do hope there is a sequel but will understand if there isn\'t one. And I say that you live this story right in the section its in. I\'ve seen so many HG/BZ/DM stories in this section is ridiculous, and I haven\'t heard anyone complaints about those.
person cruttan
schedule September 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love this story, and it\'s a beautiful ending. Your Blaise and Draco are so wonderul. Blaise, especially- your opening chapters with Blaise \"wooing\" Hermione were what first got me hooked on BlaiseDracoHermione. I will hope for a sequel someday that you might have time...
person Anon
schedule September 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
come on its been 5 days!! update!!
person tubbles14
schedule August 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Please, please, PLEASE make it a happy ending!! Pretty please with Blaise and Draco on top?
person Sarah
schedule August 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Right. Well, I have to apologize for not reviewing every chapter but I\'m really rubbish at reviews so I thought I\'d save it up for one big one. And then one when it\'s finished... Anyway, i\'ve really enjoyed this story. Who wouldn\'t want to be part of a cozy Blaise/Draco couple?! I think we all knwo that people come to aff.net for the smut. And the smut here has been wonderful indeed. But so has the actual plot of the story. I\'ve written fanfiction but my hat goes off to writers who actually have a plot and direction for their story instead of mad randomness. I loved the addition of the Zabini family at St. Mungo\'s. How I would love to be a Zabini daughter because then I\'d be beautiful andbe totally allowed to shag Draco senseless. And I totally agree with you on the Bill/Charlie Weasley obsession. I cannot wait to see what they look like in the films although, with the way they\'re going, I\'m beginning to doubt we will ever see Bill or Charlie. Ah well, that\'s what imaginations are for, no? So this review is boring and I\'m sure you\'ve gotten hundreds like it but I always like to have my say! Sarah xx