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February 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Okay, I spent the last two days reading this story and now I can't wait for more! This is amazing. I hope you can update again soon!
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February 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
WooHoo! First Rizzle updates, and now you! Can't wait to see what happens next. :D
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February 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Good story.
My mind normally works overtime when reading. These gaps might be explained in a future chapter, but I thought I send a shout out:
IN THE MIDDLE, I started believing that Hermione enjoyed 2 men and they only were able to enjoy each other. How does the bond work between Draco and Blaise? They only feel the need to interact when Hermione is in the room? It seems to me if they are truly a triple, Hermione started the attraction but the Malfoy jewels would take it to the next level beyond Hermione's enjoyment. When men give us their anus, it is almost an airtight commitment except when it is just about sexual gratification. This doesn't feel like simple gratification.
RAPE HAPPENS DIFFERENTLY FOR PEOPLE. Maybe Hermione had to push through to the end of Voldermort, but I found myself wondering how she avoided staying the shower trying to wipe away the violation or cringing when anyone tried to touch her. The sleeping is a both sign of depression or of pregnancy. In the beginning you made a point of telling us about the contraception. Now I wondering why Pansy, Ginny and Hermione don't seem to be pregnant yet.
My mind normally works overtime when reading. These gaps might be explained in a future chapter, but I thought I send a shout out:
IN THE MIDDLE, I started believing that Hermione enjoyed 2 men and they only were able to enjoy each other. How does the bond work between Draco and Blaise? They only feel the need to interact when Hermione is in the room? It seems to me if they are truly a triple, Hermione started the attraction but the Malfoy jewels would take it to the next level beyond Hermione's enjoyment. When men give us their anus, it is almost an airtight commitment except when it is just about sexual gratification. This doesn't feel like simple gratification.
RAPE HAPPENS DIFFERENTLY FOR PEOPLE. Maybe Hermione had to push through to the end of Voldermort, but I found myself wondering how she avoided staying the shower trying to wipe away the violation or cringing when anyone tried to touch her. The sleeping is a both sign of depression or of pregnancy. In the beginning you made a point of telling us about the contraception. Now I wondering why Pansy, Ginny and Hermione don't seem to be pregnant yet.
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February 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
awwww such a cute chapter
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February 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow... I must read more. I have a feeling the next few chapters are going to be difficult to write, what with Hermione's psychological mind not necessarily agreeing with what her heart tells her, ie that Draco is Draco and not his father. Hmm.... Looking forward to them though!
~Spiritxx
~Spiritxx
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February 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
YOUR BACK YAY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! more more more more more more
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February 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
this needs to be updatedddd pleaseeee
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February 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Saying this chappie was a downer is a little bit of an understatement, but I see how it's vital to the plot.
I don't remember if I reviewed back when I was reading your story, but I honestly just reread the entire thing today to refresh my memory. I'm glad you've taken it up again, and look foward to the next chapters :)
~Spiritxx
I don't remember if I reviewed back when I was reading your story, but I honestly just reread the entire thing today to refresh my memory. I'm glad you've taken it up again, and look foward to the next chapters :)
~Spiritxx
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January 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow this story is very in depth isn't it? I'm curious as to where it is going to go. There are so many angles and so many secrets. And will Draco bind himself to Hermione? If so, what happens to Blaise? And will she forgive him? But that, if it ever comes up, will probably be far into the future.
Its really intriguing how you advance the relationship between Hermione and Draco and then separately between Hermione and Blaise, but you sort of hinder the relationship between Blaise and Draco. It shows that in the future there could be a lot of drama, as well as jealousy haha. :)
Anyways, wonderful, I'm off to read more.
Its really intriguing how you advance the relationship between Hermione and Draco and then separately between Hermione and Blaise, but you sort of hinder the relationship between Blaise and Draco. It shows that in the future there could be a lot of drama, as well as jealousy haha. :)
Anyways, wonderful, I'm off to read more.
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January 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is a very interesting fic. I have been reading it for a while and it is something I've enjoyed sticking with. I have a secret love of Draco/Hermione/Blaise fics so I was quite excited to find this. You write it very well and the plot is quite interesting. I'm not one of those people who goes to read fics because of the sex so I find my favorite chapters in this tend to be the ones without sex! Lol. But the sex scenes are very nice too, and I very much understand what you mean when you say those are the hardest to write. They really are.
As far as the plot goes it is good and for the most part you have the characters actually in character. But I did notice that the boys falling in love with Hermione and vice versa was quite rushed. But I understand that probably had to happen so that you could get on with the story. That is really my only critique. Other than that, I'm very drawn in. Nice story. :)
As far as the plot goes it is good and for the most part you have the characters actually in character. But I did notice that the boys falling in love with Hermione and vice versa was quite rushed. But I understand that probably had to happen so that you could get on with the story. That is really my only critique. Other than that, I'm very drawn in. Nice story. :)