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August 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This was an awsome chapter. loved how harry was growling without realising it. Update soon.
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August 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Dude there are some things u need ta cover
1. whats up with Sev\'s necklace
2. when is draco gonna clue harry in on his crush
3. fish and strawberrries ? ew
Seriously glad u continued the story and can\'t wait for an update!
1. whats up with Sev\'s necklace
2. when is draco gonna clue harry in on his crush
3. fish and strawberrries ? ew
Seriously glad u continued the story and can\'t wait for an update!
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August 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wonderful update... i truely do hope you continue this.... harry is soooo cute.. and you can\'t stop before him and draco hook up.. :)
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August 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hurray! ^^ I love it! A great (but horribly sad [and mean!!! >~<]) chapter! Weasel is sooo mean! Poor Kitty! ^^ *purrs* I like the nickname! My cat\'s name is Kitty! =^^=(blush)
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August 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
great story and all, though you keep using \"thou\" when you mean \"though\" and they are NOT the same thing... thou actually means something along the lines of \"you\" as in \"holier than thou\" and I really can\'t explain it even though I read the thing because I get boggled when the congugation charts come out so if you want to know more you can check out http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Thou
sorry about complaining but every time \"thou\" showed up in your story my mind would get sidetracked... I also noticed that you call 2 of Draco\'s friends the wrong things... though I haven\'t read any of the Harry Potter books, I have seen all the movies so far and have read thousands (by the way \"thou\" can also be an abbrieviaton for thousand or thousandth) of HP fanfics... and I looked it up in the HP lexicon (http://www.hp-lexicon.org)... so it should be Vincent Crabbe (as in Crab not Grab) and Gregory Goyle not \"Vicente Goyle and Gregory Grabbe\"...
sorry again and please don\'t let my bitching stop you from writing more I really do enjoy this story and I\'m really interested to know what\'s going on with Draco... though I\'m kinda getting anoyed with people who keep making Harry a small girlish uke (uh... japanese uke is the submissive seme is the dominate in a relationship) when HE is supposedly the only one who can kill Voldie and HE is the one who has gone through so many trials... for Merlin\'s sake HE killed a basilisk by himself! Harry IS NOT A WEAKLING! Um... uh... sorry yet again I don\'t mind your version of Harry I just needed to get that off my chest... I\'m going to go look for all the info I can find on Harry\'s official physical descriptions now... please write more, bye
sorry about complaining but every time \"thou\" showed up in your story my mind would get sidetracked... I also noticed that you call 2 of Draco\'s friends the wrong things... though I haven\'t read any of the Harry Potter books, I have seen all the movies so far and have read thousands (by the way \"thou\" can also be an abbrieviaton for thousand or thousandth) of HP fanfics... and I looked it up in the HP lexicon (http://www.hp-lexicon.org)... so it should be Vincent Crabbe (as in Crab not Grab) and Gregory Goyle not \"Vicente Goyle and Gregory Grabbe\"...
sorry again and please don\'t let my bitching stop you from writing more I really do enjoy this story and I\'m really interested to know what\'s going on with Draco... though I\'m kinda getting anoyed with people who keep making Harry a small girlish uke (uh... japanese uke is the submissive seme is the dominate in a relationship) when HE is supposedly the only one who can kill Voldie and HE is the one who has gone through so many trials... for Merlin\'s sake HE killed a basilisk by himself! Harry IS NOT A WEAKLING! Um... uh... sorry yet again I don\'t mind your version of Harry I just needed to get that off my chest... I\'m going to go look for all the info I can find on Harry\'s official physical descriptions now... please write more, bye
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August 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*purrs in content* Kawaii! ^^ how sweet! I loved the strawberry bit6 too! ^^ I HATE Weasel right now! But I\'m glad Gin and Mione stayed with him! And Pansy is a pug! Die die die Pansy! *growls at the evil scarlet woman!* ^^ I liked the mood-changing comment too!! ^^ lol
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August 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Interesting chapter. I want to hear more about the prejudices against the Fey in the wizarding world.
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August 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
A great story and well written and I am sure that I am not the only one who might have mentioned that you need a beta for the spelling. It really brings down the wonderfulness of your story. Thanks again for a great story.
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August 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yay!!! A new chapter this is a great story!! This chapter was cool.... what is the deal with Draco what happened that his friends had to tell him that they still supported him, etc? Harry is so cute... keep writing.
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August 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*smile* You are continuing!!!! Yippie! So Draco\'s got a crush?! I can\'t wait for more! Please hurry with chapter 6!