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for Before and After The End

by MidnightGuardian

person Lil Angel
schedule August 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You should update this every chance you get.
I love this story ;)
person kai
schedule August 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love you for writing more. it was perfect of course and if you want me to be a happy draco loving kitty you had better update tons.
person NightOwl
schedule August 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I\'m happy for your update, I have waited for it quite impatiently! This chapter was interesting. Now we have Draco here. So he has secret crush on Harry and Blaise, Crab and Goyle know it? Yes! Harry is cute. Do you think he can stay with Snape or will he have a privat chamber somewhere in the castle? I\'m looking forward to next chapter very much.
person minagorishi
schedule August 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow...this story is absolutely adorable so far...please update soon!
schedule August 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WOW!!!!!! Harry\'s Fey and sooooooo cute! This fic is great! I just love lil uke Harry! And his cat ears and tail, cute... Can\'t wait for more!
Much Love
~koolanimefreek
person Bizzy
schedule August 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
The plot line for the story is good but you really need a beta reader. You tend to leave out words in your sentences so it is hard to figure out what it is that you are trying to say. Also you use the wrong words when you are trying to describe things, such as \'load\' instead of \'loud\', \'treat\' instead of \'threat\', \'where\' instead of \'were\'. If you fix the grammer your story would run more smoothly and be more enjoyable to read. I do like your story and hope that you continue it, taking into account the tips other reviewers and I have given you.
person elecktra
schedule August 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was great!! I love it!! Your doing an excellent job! update soon!
person JJ
schedule August 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Love AU stories and this one is good. Kitten Harry is just so adorable and I think Snape will make a wonderful father figure for him. Please continue writing and update soon.
person Narcissa Black
schedule August 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Still loving the story, glad you continued. The tri-wizard tournament was in fourth year.
person Joana
schedule August 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG... you continues *eyes glow* I was like... YAT... another chapter and now I\'m going to give a party! My throat hurts from constraint laughter!
Joy