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for Before and After The End

by MidnightGuardian

person Missi
schedule June 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love how you always mention what Harry\'s tail is doing, and how to judge his emotions by it-just like a real cat. It\'s attention to detail like that that makes me love this story so much more than I would otherwise (not that I wouldn\'t, I\'m just \"slightly\" anal-retentive). Thanks for updating, and please update again!! Will Draco be making an appearance anytime soon?
person Alexa
schedule June 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very interesting and sweet, but you really need a beta. If you want I\'d be happy to help out.
person tessa3
schedule June 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hmmm!!! NEVER MIND ABOUT THAT LAST REVIEW!!! *giggles, blushes* ITs an update!!! *snorts* this was a new chapter... chapter 3 *nodding* i like it.. very cute *nodding* i wonder what else Har is going to get into *nodding* yep yep.. he\'s so kittenish!! i wonder how everyone is going to react tohim.. will they still talk to him and be his friend because his Harry.. or will they treat himi like Sh** because he\'s FEY??? *shurgs* we will never know until the next chapter *starts dancing*
person sbkar
schedule June 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Fluffy kitty Harry...submissive, too... But, I grew up with cats; they can be very viscious when protecting.
person Kylie
schedule June 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hello I just wanted to say that i love this story and you should continue it.
Harry is so adoriable!!!!! I\'m looking forward to the next chapter.
person Lady X
schedule June 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
awww!!!! so cute. I don\'t like seeing sad harry or sad kitties but sad kitty looking Harry was just too cute to not mental picture. another wonderful chapter. i look forward to the next
person anjellic
schedule June 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i like the idea of the story...interesting and different which is refreshing. i hope you keep writing. do you have a beta? if not it might be a good idea to get one...just a few spelling errors here and there. overall very good story
person elecktra
schedule June 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awwww...Harry\'s soooo cute and adorable!!! I love your story so far!! Please continue!! Udpate soon!!!!!(I especially love Harry\'s ears and tail)!!!!
person Aisling
schedule June 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
thats really cute!! more soon i hope xx
person thrnbrooke
schedule June 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful! I can\'t wait for chapter 4! Is James still alive? Severus wishes he was Harry\'s real father. Oh I love this!