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June 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Mm. Another very nice chapter! Now I just need to wait to see more!
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June 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is a interesting story. I look forward to reeading more chapters.
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June 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I just wanted to let you know that this is turning into a great, cute story. Keep up hte great work and can\'t wait to read your next update.
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June 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
It\'s a good story !!!
I love cat-Harry, he is sooo cute! ^-^
When will Draco appear ?
Please update soon !
I love cat-Harry, he is sooo cute! ^-^
When will Draco appear ?
Please update soon !
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June 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great concept for a story, but you are in desperate need for a beta. I suspect that perhaps you are a different nationality. I can well understand that to speak the english language is a challenge in itself, but to write it must be a real rascal. But in order for your story to be truly enjoyed you should get some help.
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June 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
more more more
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June 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hi,
its very nice idea. I hope you will continue soon. But I am curious about Harry being more \"childlisch\"-kitten for Snape and at the same time having quite mature bond with Draco (ooo, I hope very much there will be some kind of it)
Its nice!
its very nice idea. I hope you will continue soon. But I am curious about Harry being more \"childlisch\"-kitten for Snape and at the same time having quite mature bond with Draco (ooo, I hope very much there will be some kind of it)
Its nice!
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June 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This story is sweet! You have some great ideas.
I\'m not sure though: Did you mean to make Harry sound like a child or is it the spelling, grammar and verb tense mistakes that are doing it? I suggest a beta. An editor would help you fix up the problems so your story is easier to read and therefore more interesting! You have the ideas, now you just have to practice the delivery. I have a masters degree, but I still need someone to go over what I\'ve written and catch any mistakes or confusion in my creative writing. Good luck, and don\'t give up. I\'m still going to read all of this story- it\'s that good!
I\'m not sure though: Did you mean to make Harry sound like a child or is it the spelling, grammar and verb tense mistakes that are doing it? I suggest a beta. An editor would help you fix up the problems so your story is easier to read and therefore more interesting! You have the ideas, now you just have to practice the delivery. I have a masters degree, but I still need someone to go over what I\'ve written and catch any mistakes or confusion in my creative writing. Good luck, and don\'t give up. I\'m still going to read all of this story- it\'s that good!
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June 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
AAAAAAAAAAWWWW!
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June 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*blinks, taps foot, sighs* I HAVE read this before... *nodding* i know i have *snorts* is this a repost.. or did i miss something... oh by the way.. I like the story.. its a Furry!Harry, MagicalCreature!Harry!!! lol.. anyways.. please let me know if this is a repost or i started reading this on a different website and you just happen to post here *throws hands up in air* I give up *huffs, walks away*