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for Before and After The End

by MidnightGuardian

person thrnbrooke
schedule July 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
What is this necklace? What does Severus need to tell him? What is wrong with Draco? Did I miss something? I hope Ginny and Hermione don\'t turn their backs on him. Why is it so bad? I need chapter 5!
person Anonymous bystander with a thing for kitties
schedule July 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh, nooo! You can\'t! You absolutely can\'t! Your story is marvelous! Besides, a lot of people would be disappointed if you ended your story without Draco meeting kittified Harry...\\(^0^)/
person Elsie
schedule July 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You\'ve got a really good plot going and I wish for you to continue. The only thing you need to do is get yourself someone to beta the chapters before posting. If you don\'t know a beta and think you won\'t feel akward about it, I would be more than happy to offer my assistance. I work with editing drafts all day and have become very good at it. Don\'t give up creating something that has the potential to turn out to be great because of a small oversight. I usually stop reading a story as soon as I see a lot of grammatical errors, but I stuck with this one because I really liked where you were taking it and I\'m intregued about Snape\'s and the Malfoy\'s roles. I hope you reconsider aborting the story. ^_^
Elsie
person Neko-chan
schedule July 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM

KAWAII!!!!!!!!!!!!! Almost like the anime Loveless ^^
person PJ
schedule July 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is very interesting please update again soon. I want to knkow the whole story behind Draco\'s parents and what Sev should tell him.
person Foxmouse
schedule July 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OK I don\'t tend to leave reviews, but I think that it would be sad if you stopped posting this fic. Yes, you do have so so grammer. However, the story that you\'ve thought up is really interesting. I\'d like to know what\'s going to happen. If the grammer is bothering you have someone beta read it for you. If it\'ll make a differance to you I would be willing to beta for you. I have pretty good grammer most of the time. Unfortunately, I can\'t do what you have. Made a story that I at least really want to be allowed to read. Harry\'s so cute with ears!!!!!
Keep writing,
Foxmouse:)
person Kara
schedule July 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Please don\'t stop writing your story. I haven\'t noticed any glaring grammer problems and the story line is interesting. Not to mention a bit different from most other stories. I have come across plenty of stories that had far worse grammer problems.
person Kat Potter
schedule July 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
mmmm I wants more :P Please write more it\'s very good. Though you might want to get yourself a beta to read over it. Caught a bit misspelled words and such.
person Drew
schedule July 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Love the story please cont. Will Harry go to slytherin?
person Snarky B.
schedule July 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I normally don\'t read stories where the author doesn