rate_review Reviews

please don\'t discontinue this fic. I like your story very much. sure there are bound to be people who are going to constantly nit-pick at your grammer and writing style, but i think your doing a fine job. It takes alot of courage in my opinion to make your stories avaiable for everyone to read. I myself haven\'t quite gotten up the courage to do what you have done but, i do like to read a lot of fanfics and your story is quickly becoming one of my favorites. I can\'t wait to see what happens to harry and what kinds of adventures or danger he gets into. I\'m not one to review stories since i normally just save them and read them later when i get time but i saw your note and just had to respond. You won\'t be able to please everyone who reads your story but i do hope you continue, it\'s a very intriguing fic and you shouldn\'t quit writing it just because of complaints about your grammer. You could always go back in the future and fix these \'supposed\' mistakes if you so wish but i don\'t think there\'s anything overly wrong with it. your also right that there are other stories with worse grammer, if this is such a problem to others than they should move on to a different fic and allow others to enjoy your story. I hope this helps you i\'m not very good at writing what i think done so people can understand what i\'m trying to get across.

i think youshould continue this storry i really like it.. the writting is not bad

This is a great story, please don\'t discontinue it! I hardly notice the grammar, but if you think it\'s so bad, aquire a beta-reader. I volunter, if it means you\'ll continue.

Don\'t stop this is a great story!! Whoever said you had bad grammer is a bastard! So please keep on writing no matter what somebody else says, there are still others who want you to keep writing this story. Please!! Thank you for your consideration for telling us about thinking of not finishing this story. But i think that would be a bad idea. So please finish!! ^.^

continue please because this is a really good story

oh please dont stop this story! I love it! Continue it please please please~

It does not matter to me how bad your grammar skills are. I still enjoy reading your work^_^ so please continue writing it^_^ PPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAASSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE

Somehow I think \"Snarky B\" reveiwer just said that on purpose to see your reaction. If you stop posting and take down the story you let them win and have the power to keep you from doing something you like. I am assuming you like to write since you are writing/posting this story. They complained about the grammer and suggested a beta.... yes they did it in a not so nice way. If they were going to leave a review like that they could have at least offered to be the beta. everyone makes mistakes I have with my own writing even after checking it twice and using spell check.... hell even my beta has missed stuff. Its not like we can\'t understand the story or anything. This story has a great plot and nice twist to the whole \"Harry/draco has magicial creature origins\" I love the idea of Harry with cute ears and tail. (even though I don\'t really like cats) I mean I just love the anime Inuyasha and he has those cute ears too. Anyway please continue don\'t let that one reviewer win you take the story down or stop posting and they will probably laugh and point saying \"look what I did\" I look forward to the NEXT CHAPTER OF THIS STORY.

Don\'t you dare! I love your story, please continue writing.....

i though tit was good the the grammer was bad but you could always get a beta, and its really not that bad of grammer I have seen way worse on this site with people who dont even care, if you continue I will read