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July 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hi
I read your anouncement. I\'m not sure why you feel your story should be discontinued. I\'m really enjoying it, it\'s really cute. I\'ve definately seen much worse grammar and think you should keep going. I look forward to the next enstallment if you decide to continue.
I read your anouncement. I\'m not sure why you feel your story should be discontinued. I\'m really enjoying it, it\'s really cute. I\'ve definately seen much worse grammar and think you should keep going. I look forward to the next enstallment if you decide to continue.
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July 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
contin.
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July 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I\' sorry other people have made you feel bad about your wonderful story. I would be honored to beta it for you. I already beta for Dragon34 and Petalsoft. It would take me less than and hour to do all 4 chapters. Send me an e-mail. Please.
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July 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
If you do not continue with this story, I will personally hunt you down,
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July 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I think you should continue to write the story. I really like it, and the grammar is not that bad.
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July 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I noticed 2 errors in my own review when I re-read it. That\'s what happens when you get emotional.
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July 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Please don\'t be intimidated by a bad review. If your grammar is not perfect, get a beta, someone to catch any small mistakes before you release. She/he can help you improve your grammar too. ^_^ And isn\'t that one of the purposes of fanfics, to improve your writing? Of course, another purpose is to provide entertainment for readers like me ... which you certainly did. Good luck on finishing your fic. I\'m sure it will be as good as if not better than before.
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July 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i liked your story.i hope you keep writting.i think you have a lot of talent,so please don\'t give up.
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July 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i really like your story, i would really like it if you would finish it. Your spelling and grammar are as good or better than a lot of other authors.
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July 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i love your story and i can\'t believe you would think to discontinue it who cares about grammar when you story is so enticing i really hoped i spelled that right but it is a great story i would love it if you would continue to write it your story i can\'t wait for the next chapter and i also loved how you made harry so dependent snape i think that that is really cute