rate_review Reviews

This is a wonderful story. I love where it\'s headed (even though I was hoping that this would turn into a Harry/Snape story.) Please continue this. I must have super horrible grammer because I didn\'t even notice.

Snarky B. is a BIG BLOODY GIT!

I really love this story, and I would be horribly sadden to see it go. If you are worried about your grammer, I can tell you right now that, alothough you do have some mistakes, you are doing a lot better than you think you are. This is one of the best stories that I hae read in a while, and that is saying a lot, considering that I read almost every day. If you are really worried about your grammer and other things like, I offer to be your beta reader (proof reader). If you want to check out my stories to see if I fit what you are looking for, they are housed on FFN (fanfiction.net) under geminidragon. If you want me as your beta reader please e-mail me.

I love this story so please continue!

finish it

PLEASE CONTINUE!!!!!!!
I REALLY LOVE THIS STORY, AND AM SERIOUSLY CONSIDERING DRAWING A PICTURE OF KITTY HARRY!!!!!
LOVE YA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Kai

I absolutely love your story and anyone that tells you other wise are stupid. it also could be that i also have the grammer skills of a fourteen year old, but i still think you story is great.

we\'re not perfect are we? just search for a beta and then you can say f*ck me grammar skills ^_^ I\'m not the best myself but at least I got a good excuse ^_~
so go on writing! I know what you meant with most of the things and that is what counts
GW

You have to continue!!!!!!! I don\'t mind any grammar mistakes! I don\'t even notice them! As long as it\'s a good story wih an interesting plot and has my favorite couple (Draco/Harry) then I\'m happy and satisfied! ^^
>< Ooo!!!! KITTY HARRY IS SSSSSOOOOOOO CUTE!!!!!! -^o^-
I can\'t wait until you update!!!!!!!!!

come on finsh the story it really good and as for garmmar it better then mine and I\'m 19 anyway something like this is about unleashing you soul and your imagination please finsh this.

Hey now! No need for that! I love your story Please don\'t discontinue it! I\'ve been waiting for an update!