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hey, i think your idea\'s pretty decent. i think you should continue it since it\'s going pretty well [to me][sorry about the lack of capital letters. my shifts are malfunctioning and using the caps lock button is a pain] if you\'d like, i\'ll happily be your beta, just drop me an e-mail. i\'ll try to reply within a few days. =]

Please don\'t stop this story. It seems to be really good. You could always get someone to check your chapters before you post them, many authors do. Besides a few grammatical mistakes that even my best friend makes, your story is really good and I can\'t wait to find out how it ends.

don\'t stop this story i like it verry mutch
don\'t listen to other people just wright what you want

I think you should continue it. It doesn\'t matter if you have grammar as a fourteen year old. If you do not continue writing, you will never improve on your grammar.

NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO
PLZ DONT STOP I DONT CARE BOUT THE SPELLING OR GRAMMER
PLZ KEEP WRITING IT IS SUCH A GOOD STORY DONT SSSSSTTTTTOOOOPPPP
*SOBS* PLZ UPDATE

n-no you cant discontnue it! IT IS WAY BETTER THAN SOME I HAVE READ HERE!!!!! Honest!! I love this fic soooooooooo much. Your grammer and other crap isnt that bad. I WILL BE YOUR BETA IF THAT IS WHAT IT TAKES FOR YOU TO CONTINUE!! just please please please dont give up on it unless you honestly cant think of any where for the fic to go and if you EVER get stuck for something you can e-mail me and i will give you ideas if it will help! just PLEASE dont discontinue!! I love it and will CRY if you dont update it!!

You do not have the grammar skills of a fourteen year old. I know fourteen year olds who can\'t even spell kitty correct. I say continue and if some one gives you trouble about your grammar just ignore them, they\'re not worthy your time. We\'re not here to read grammar, we\'re here to read your story.

Please continue your story, it was just getting great! I\'ll cry if you don\'t! (T^T)/)

ok yes u have no grammer, so what i have put up with worse and all u need is a good beta. I love the story and it has a twist i don\'t think i have seen anywhere else. u have a great imagination and the story flows really well, please keep writing

Please don\'t stop writing this story ! I like it and I have a solution to your problems....get a beta reader to help you with your story. I hope to read an update soon!!!!!

i know you asked if you should continue, due to what you seem to consider grievous grammar, but i can honestly say that i would like to see where you plan to go with the story. frankly, in my own experience, the two best things that help that particular difficulty are beta-readers and practice. it may seem like snobby advice, but i know that i still look back at my first fics with a wince and a laugh, and that i was woman enough to admit that i could use improvement. getting someone to read things over really does help, as does reading it aloud to someone. when speaking it or having someone else read, the extra attention seems to pick mistakes you didn\'t realise were there.

honestly, i\'m enjoying catboy!harry and would love to see what it is that lucius and narcissa think snape should tell him. i also look forward to draco\'s reaction to the new, fluffy and adorable potter... i hope you choose to continue and polish your skills. time is the best teacher of all.