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i do not often offer, maar, if you will continue your story i will be your beta....i love this story, and so am offering. i love our story, and so sod what everyone else thinks....if you need a hand, just say,
love
ning

personally I\'d like it if you would continue the story. things like grammar and spelling can usually be caught by a good writing program, or even better, a trusted beta. you seem to have an excellent outline for the story and I would hate to see it abandoned for something that can easily be corrected. Good luck, and keep creating.

You\'re last chapter made me weep for Harry. I can\'t believe you\'re thinking of stopping it. I think you\'re doing a great job. Harry is sounding really cute and I love that Hermione and Ginny stood up for him. I think it\'s funny that Harry chose Snape as his \"mother\" figure. Definitely coninue. It\'s a great story idea and it would be a terrible waste if you discontinued it.

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love ning

WHA??? Nononono you can\'t discontiue this story!! It\'s very good, and different from any other creature!Harry fics out there!!

Please dont stop! Ok I\'ll be honest that this story wont ever be a literary masterpiece, but I really like it. It\'s a fresh storyline that is appealing and it\'s got me hooked after only a few chapters. If someone says that it\'s not \'good enough\' then let them go jump. If you enjoy writing this story then dont let anyone stop you. Just look at the hit counter and see how many people enjoyed your story, to the one or two who may not. If you feel the need to appease them then maybe you can get a beta reader to help you with some of the major mistakes. I really want you t continue this and hope that someone making a comment doesnt ruin the fanfic experience for you.

HOW CAN YOU NOT CONTINUE!!!!!! i have been waiting ages for you to update because u made a awsome story and now you don\'t want to continue it? i don\'t see any major flaws in your grammer...so you made a few mistakes big deal your human. if your grammer really bothers u that much ask if anyone would be willing to be a beta reader for you...i\'m sure some one would do it for you and worse comes to worse i\'ll do it, i may not know punctiation that well but i can get a dictonary for spelling and such. PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE continue the story!!!!

i tell you now.. if you do not finish i shall cry... and i mean literally cry... personally i don\'t give a damn about grammer mistakes... if someone else has a problem with it... tell them that they can be your beta and fix them... i like your story... as i\'m sure you can tell by my reviews... please continue.. if for no other reason than you do not want to be the cause of my tears...

this is your story, not theirs... please keep up the amazing work..

Oh no you don\'t this is damn good spelling doesn\'t matter during steamy scenes plz finish plz.

Please Continue with the story, I like it when harry turn into things and draco is his mate, Please, please, please continue, I don\'t mind the grammer, other stories i\'ve read had worse. When i found this story, i read it four times.