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for Before and After The End

by MidnightGuardian

person PJ
schedule July 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*sigh* jeez don\'t stop writing because of ONE reviewer..... look at how many reviews you had before that one even came along. Please continue this is a good story. Of course not everybody will like it but I only saw ONE out of over what 50-60 maybe more? Keep writing. So there are a some grammar errors in the summary and in the chapters it didn\'t make it impossible to read. I have read many fics that are worse and pretty much unreadable. Please do not let one \"evil deatheater reviewer\" stop you from writing.
person mlp5487
schedule July 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i\'m sad to hear you want to discontinue this. i was enjoying it a lot. :(
person Cecilie
schedule July 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You have to continue the story! Your grammar isn\'t bad......and I guarantee that I have read 1000\'s of stories worse than yours. It has a nice plot and I think you\'re good at writing. Did someone flame you??? Ignore them, don\'t let others control how you feel about something or what you do. It\'s your story so I can\'t make you continue writing it, but I honestly think it\'s a good story and if you let those bad feelings decide for you then you will have lost something. If people don\'t like your writing, or have complaints then they can just stop reading it, but there are people who like it. Write for the people who want to read!
person Alex
schedule July 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
NOOOOOOO! Please continue the story! WHo cares about a few small grammar mistakes! If people complain about it it\'s their own fault! I\'ve really gotten in to this plot and I think you\'ve done some excellent writing! Your plot bunny is extremely cute! *holds up cute bunny with big eyes* Come on finish your story for the cute bunny! PWEASE! *begs*
person Nathalie
schedule July 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
More please your doing great
I have the same problem with spelling
Greetings Nathalie
person niisa
schedule July 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hi

I am sorry that some one told you that. I really like your story and hope that you can forget the obvious jealousy that accompanied that review. I thought your ideas were original and your story was great. Last I checked while grammer is appreciated it is the original idea that drives fan ficition
person jewel of the sea
schedule July 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i really like this story and i think you should finish it.if you like i could beta it for you,iv\'e never beta\'d anything before but my spelling and grammer\'s not to bad.
person spaz gail
schedule July 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
omfg how dare you discontinue!!!!!!!
*pouts* i wanna know what happens with dracoa and i really wanna know about the locket.......
i shall eat your leg if you don\'t continue!!!
person Anon
schedule July 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
dude, i like the story and i really dont mind the grammar mistsakes, seriously u arent the worst on this site, because, lets face it, there are some people who write stories who are just plain morons. please finish the story..
person bob
schedule July 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I am enjoying this. I dont understand some parts but its still good