rate_review Reviews

Hey, I don\'t review stories often, but here I am reviewing. I just wanted to say that i love your story and your grammar is not that bad at all. I truly hope that you would continue to write, because you have an excelent story line.

Take care
and don\'t give up
Spiritkat

you know what, i would like to see Snarky B. write a story and see all the errors they have! your story is awsome and Snarky B. being an asshole. so don\'t let one reviewer get in your way. if you still think you need help with the grammer and stuff, i\'m sure there are lots of people out there that would love to help you. if you do decide to continue, i know it will make a lot of people happy. good luck in the future and never let bitches like Snarky B. let you down, becuse there is alway some out there that will like you work, becuse i know i do.

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First off, no matter how bad your spelling is it will never get any better if u don\'t practice. The key is to reread ur work before posting it and/or get a beta or something to check over the mistakes you made and tell u where u went wrong and why. Secondly, I know there are a lot of weak stories, I\'ve read some of them too and ur\'s honestly isn\'t that bad otherwise I probably wouldn\'t have continued reading it. You have great ideas you just need to work on how to express and describe them. I know this will sound prissy but grammer classes and books do work if u try to use them to there full potential. Finally, never compare your work to the work of others. This is mainly because u don\'t know how long or how developed the author\'s writing experiance is, therefore you might be trying to judge ur work against the work of Leonardo DeVinci. That doesn\'t mean, however, that you shouldn\'t read or aspire to be as good as better authors then yourself. keep trying and don\'t give up.
CHEERS!

continue please...the story is great :)
If you think the spelling is bad you can allways get a beta that could help.
But please don\'t give up on the story.

Hi there, please don\'t be discouraged, I think the story is fine. I love the father/son relationship with Snape and Harry. I admire anyone with the talent to write and the guts to put the story out there for others to read. Please continue.

Please continue! You have a good story here! Who told you all of that rubbish about not having a good fic? I\'ll beat um up for you...I like your ideas and characters, please dont let your story die!

Hi abslouty loving your story, ( i just found it and am quite concerned about the authors note) I will confess that the gramma could use some improvement, but the story itself is very creative and quite original. Perhaps you should consider finding a reader so they can edit the story before you post. it is far to good a story not to finish. that makes me so mad, just getting into a good story and it is never completed. so please please please finish the story!!!

cheers

P.s feel free to email me i would be quite happy to be your reader.

COME ON! Pwease! I hate these stories usually but I love this! He\'s adorable! I don\'t even know what the word \"grammar\" means! I speak English and I don\'t speak good! (I\'m doing this on purpose dear) but I know how you feel. I went through the same thing. I wrote Yugiou on here. I\'m \"Merkabah\" and a lot of ppl loved my stories but I got frustrated that I couldn\'t spell and use grammar properly. I just hope you don\'t give up! I would love to read more!

Loves from Sara Lynn.

Don\'t stop writing! Seriously, I really enjoy this story and I would be very disappointed if you stopped it. You have excellent grammar skills and the only noticeable problems with the story is minor typos which always happen when you don\'t have a beta reader. The last chapter was slightly confusing towards the end but that can be explained with later chapters. I adore this story, it is an interesting new twist on the \'Harry is not human\' plot device! Rarely does anyone write a nonhuman!Harry and have there be social connotations that are negative! This story is lovely and while there are always better writers out there and there are always flamers, write for yourself and maybe those of us who greatly enjoy your story. Please continue, but if you can\'t I\'m sorry and I will greatly miss seeing what happens later on.