rate_review Reviews

Please keep updating. This is a REALLY GOOD story. Yeah, there are some grammar mistakes. So what? Mistakes happen. The plot and how you develop the story make up for the grammar. Plus I do believe I am kinda sorta addicted to cute little fey Harry... I just wanna hug him and squeeze him and eat him all up! Then use my sharp toys to hurt Ron and the rest of the Gryfindorks (how do you spell Harry\'s house name?) for hurting cute little fey Harry!

I love this fic, and honestly I will hunt you down if you don\'t finish it. If youre worried about your spelling and grammar, you could always get a beta reader. Alot of fanfiction authors have them.
Don\'t stop the fic please.
Silvananoir

I would really hope that you continue this story. honestly speaking i don care much about the grammar. I think what really matter was the story line of the story. Hope u will continue ^-^

Continue, please. I like your \"kitten-Harry\" very much. I like your story very much. Don\'t be sad because of one stupid review. There are many people who like your story and who are impatiently waiting for next chapters and all this people would be sad if you quit this!

sorry for my poor english. It\'s not my native language. But you can see here like REALLY POOR english looks :-)))

I thought this was an adorable tale and was waiting to see what would happen. I would truly hate to see it end before its time. A lot of writers start things and don\'t finish them, much to my frustration. Do you have a beta? That could help if you\'re feeling so frustrated about mistakes. The idea you came up with here is unique and one I had hoped to read to the conclusion. If you\'re interested in finding a beta (if you don\'t have one), email me. I\'ll be happy to discuss my writing background with you and see if I can help you. Please don\'t stop this tale!

Your story is good but you need to spend more time with each chapter before you post. Read, re-read, and then read each sentence, paragraph, and page again. It\'s true that you have a lot of mistakes in your story but most of them are simple things like mixed up words (example: surrogate not seargent). Find a decent beta to review and edit your chapters and you should be fine. The mistakes in your story are distracting and fustrating for the reader and that may be why you\'ve receieved discouraging reviews. The one thing I believe that you should NOT do is stop writting. If writting this story makes you happy then continue. Realize that the opinion of random people on the internet only hurts you if you let it. After all, has anyone who negatively reviewed your fanfics ever written any of their own? They probably can\'t do any better. I leave you with two cliche sayings: first, Rome wasn\'t built in a day, and second, practice makes perfect. If you enjoy writting and work at it then you\'ll get better over time. Don\'t let a few idiots get in the way of doing what you love.

please don\'t stop writing this story its really good. i love reading it. i wouldn\'t mind you just writing it for me personally and shouldn\'t pay attention to what some people say about it they don\'t know what their talking about. oh and if you ever need something cheering up about your writing feel free to email me. update soon please. ^_^

please continue! This story is awesome! At least tell us what happens!

Please continue the story. I have just discovered it and have enjoyed it very much. grammer is not that big of a deal. I people say it\'s bad then ignore them. I await (hopefully) for an update to your little kitty (fey) story.

choraleart

Oh, please continue! If your reason for not continuing is just the grammar, I\'d be happy to beta for you. I love your plot ^^