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hey i love this story i really think you should continue it!!!!!! please let me know what you are going to do. i love the relationship that you have built between severus and harry. please please continue

Oh no... you shouldn\'t end it because of your grammar... i find it interesting.. its different from what people right WAY DIFFERENT and that\'s what i like... if you want a beta so someone can read it before you post and help with the mistakes then i can help... ^__^ sarafina14@hotmail.com... this ismy email.. i think you should continue.. i really want to know what Luc and Cissa knows about Sev

I think you should continue the story. I\'ve just found it and am really liking it. I hope to read more. Grammar skills can be overcome, some of the best authors in history had none. All you need is to find a good beta. There are plenty of available ones of Livejoural, they even have a group just for that. I\'d beta for you, but I\'m not that great at correcting other people\'s grammar.
Please don\'t discontinue this story.

omg, you had so better finish this. so what if you have bad grammer/spelling, so do i. this is a wonderful story that takes a common theme (harry not being completely human) and makes it original again. i really hope you finish this \'cause i so wanna know who harry\'s mate is and what will happen with the rest of the students and hermonie and ginny and all that stuff.

CONTINUE!!! don\'t listen to some fucktard who thinks that eveything has to be perfect. your grammer is way better then mine so i won\'t ever complain and i really hope you continue this story

and also from just quickly reading over the reviews you have a lot of people who want you to continue becaues this is a fantastic story
you are a great writer

As i said before i hope you continue

Please do continue. I know people, exspecially about my work and my friend\'s, that they can be mean. If you need a beta let me know, but don\'t stop. You have an interesting plot and I hope you don\'t end it. But if you do, would you give what you have and I could continue it.

Thanks...

your story is great, the idea is very original and that is what counts. don\'t worry about your grammarical errors, everyone has there weak points. so please continue your story for i realy am attached to it already.
ps. if you need help with your grammar or spelling, i would gladly help you.

What! you\'re not going to continue!!! that is waful! i wanted to read the rest. it is a good story plz update soon

I\'m sorry someone made you feel your story wasn\'t any good. It\'s just as good as the ones on this and other sites. I read your story although I probably won\'t read any more. Not because it\'s not good but because I don\'t like submissive Harry stories. I like the fey/cat thing but the fey usually aren\'t submissive. They are usually very dominate. I much prefer dominate Harry, submissive Draco and if one of them gets pregnant I prefer pregnant Draco. Unfortunately there are not that many stories like that out there. You continue to write if you want too. If someone is complaining about your story they don\'t have to read it. I may peek in from time to time but like I said it\'s just not my cup of tea. Good luck sweetie and don\'t let them get you down.