rate_review Reviews

I love this story and I hope that you will continue it. I want to know what Severus\' secret is. If you would like me to, I wouldn\'t mind beta reading for spelling and grammar for you. Email me if you are interested.

You should continue. It is a great story. I love it!!! HARRY HAS CUTE WITTLE KITTY EARS AND TAIL!!! AWWWWW (goes off and daydreams about Harry\'s new look)

What is this? You can\'t stop now! I really don\'t think your grammar is *that* bad. It\'s lots of better than some I have tried to read! And I like your story, it\'s so cute and I love animal-Harrys:)

You shouldn\'t quit just because some stupid flames you or something, they are to be ignored. And grammar problems are easy to fix anyway, just find a beta:)

im not one to criticize writin unless it really bad and believe me you are far from bad....this is good.....story is good and the writing skill is fine....dont let people discourage you please! Yes, i agree with you on that note about bad writing on this site...man sum of it is horrid....anyway i would like to see this story continue...i enjoy it...^^

you better continue this story!!!! i love it, i dont care about grammer i\'m horrible myself. but you got a very good plot and story here i want more of it!!!!

Please, please, please say you\'re kidding! I love this story so far. The grammatical errors are barely noticeable and do not detract from the story at all. I\'ve read others with worse grammar and yours is fine. Please keep writing! I would be devastated otherwise.
Sincerely,
Nimue

Yes. You should most definitely continue. Your story is intriguing, your format readable and any spelling mistakes you may have made do not distract from the story its self. I have read many stories where just trying to decipher the words is a headache yours is NOT one of them.
I, for one, can not wait to read the rest of your story. Please do not let a few (or more then a few) critical reviews stop you. And if your spelling(or other written mistakes) truly embarrass you that much, then may I suggest you get a beta reader, or one of your friends(on or off line) to proofread your writings before posting them? It would take longer to update but you would still be posting. I would also like to remind you that not every one who reads stories reviews them. And that sometimes silence is the biggest complement you can receive. So please continue to write.

This story is great. I absolutly love it. I think you should continue it. Kitty Harry that\'s so kawaii(cute)! Let me know if you decide to continue. I so want to read if you do. bai bai

I have only just read your story, and I think it\'s brilliant. I don\'t know who told you it was a waste of time, but it\'s not. I think you should continue writing it, and ignore anyone who tells you different. I must admit, I did notice a few grammer mistakes in your story, but so what? At least it\'s readable, unlike some people\'s!

Anyway, now that that\'s out of the way - I think you\'re story is pretty cool! There are a lot of creature fics out there, (I should know, I love creature fics and I\'ve read a lot of them!) and not all of them work, but they\'re all original in their own way and I think yours is one of the ones that stands out.

I get really annoyed at people who just flame people\'s work because they don\'t like them. I think if you don\'t like something, no-one\'s forcing you to read it. Sorry again for venting. Hope to see more of your story soon.

Astranine

GOOD story, please continue. To lack skill in one matter (like grammar) does not give you the right to deprive others from reading a perfectly nice and well thought out facet of the potterverse ;-). Get someone to prove read what you write, if you think you need to, but do not give up.