rate_review Reviews

Oh please don\'t stop!! I like your story! I think its cute (so far) and its not like spelling is perfect for everyone! If it was becasue of a nasty review, then ignore them!!!! Please don;t worry about spelling! ^^

grammer skills of a fourteen year old...
ruined a perfectly good stopry with your poor skills...
*giggle*
darling i\'m an english major
i\'ve beend evouring books since i was old enough to read
trust me there\'s nothing wrong with your writing skill in fact it\'s very nice
oh i\'m sure if i went over your writing with a fine tooth comb there would be times when you didn\'t follow EVERY grammer rule for the simple reason that you CAN\'T follow every rule they contradict each other constantly

personally i like your style of writing it\'s cute, enjoyable, and flowing.

i would love to see your story contineu it is a good story and i enjoy reading it and looking forward to the next chapter
please do continue and don\'t let some snot-nose know it all tell you your no good when we all know you are

please continue. I really like how you have written snape. And as for your grammer skills i have worse and you could always use a grammar and spell check porgram on your pc or have a friend read over it. Please do continue.

I read tons of fics a day and I love your fic. It takes a lot to put a story on my fav. list but your story is just so original and new I want to see where it\'s going. You have a great story and your grammer is not bad, at least I haven\'t noticed anything wrong with it =) The important aspect is the story and how its written and you do a beautiful job at that .. please continue with this story don\'t give it up.

~amanda

ok...whom ever told you that this story was lacking.....or you grammatical skills.....should be shoot.....i\'m sitting on my seat...glued to the screen...adn then that message that you are discontinueing...now that had my gut doing a flip flop....i think it\'s a good read...adn a riviting story line.....not ever one is talented as a writter...and when some is jeleous and doesn\'t understand greatness in the making, they have to tendancy to flame other people...don\'t think anything of flamers...think of what you think of you skills....and what a disappointment it would be for people to never even get the chance to read what you think....writting is all about \"what if\'s\"....and your \"what if\'s\" are amazing and you should continue...no matter what you do you will face prejuidce....if you don\'t deal with it now and do something you like and maybe love then you might back down from the most amazing thing that might happen to you....i know i\'m long winded...but i have a point...please continue...if only for you and me...if you ahve to email the story to me....you should know you have touched me....and that\'s what\'s important...remember that and live your dreams....ok you\'re probably getting bored of me so bye....email me anytime!!..lyndsaybenoit@rogers.com

hi, i don\'t think that you should discontinue the story. Don\'t listen to what shallow minded people have to say, i\'m enjoying it and i\'m pretty sure others are too. So please continue, i\'d love to see what happens in the next chapter.

Hey,

I seriously think that if you like writing your story, that you should continue writning it.
What the hell with grammar. I, myself, am not of english mothertongue and when I write in englsish, i don\'t care of what the others think.
Hope to see you update that cute story.
See you

You have to continue this story! Pretty, pretty please. It is an excellent story. If you need help, I can help. By the by, you DIDN\'T ruin this story. It\'s yours, so you could never ruin it.

I honestly enjoy the story and wish you would continue it. I have read very few stories where Snape and Harry bond as a family (Other than the one I am writing there have been four I know of). If you are truely concerned about grammar, I can Beta read the chapters for you and correct the errors before you post each part. I am fairly decent with grammar, enough so that you would not feel badly about posting, and can use spell check to cover my ineptitude in the spelling of certain words. You have not wasted our time and shame on you for thinking so little of your skills. ^_^ Your zeel as a storyteller far outweighs any errors in grammar that you make. I assure you.
Concider my offer, and please don\'t leave us hanging. Continue, I implore you. Please?

great story! continue it!