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for Jealousy

by brandnewdaydawning

person Alkeni
schedule November 29, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I like this story. I hope for me. :)
person SAS
schedule November 27, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I'm loving jealousy, and am falling in love with a very Slytherin Draco along with Hermione.
person Trelweny
schedule November 24, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Um... I'm confused: You have Ron dating Padma Patill but then saying that she's talking about him in the dorms where Hermione can hear and that she's not bright... but Padma is a Ravenclaw. Since she was talking to Parvati in the dorms should we conclude you meant Lavender Brown?

Otherwise I really like how this has started out. While I like Draco-turning-a-new-leaf stories, Draco seeing Purebloods as being above bowing to a Half-Blood makes so much sense.

Thanks for writing.
person Rose
schedule November 21, 2013 at 12:00 AM
This is a fabulous story! The characters seem very much themselves, instead of the normal "oh draco suddently notices hermione and falls in love all in one chapter". Fantastic!
person kit
schedule November 20, 2013 at 12:00 AM
really enjoyed this story...I hope you continue it!
person Rain
schedule November 20, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I was so shocked when I saw this story on the list! I'm so glad you updated! Observations of a Pure Blood Debutant, Obscurity, and Jealousy are three of my favorite stories. I have reread them all a few times even though the two weren't finished.

And I think it was a lovely chapter. I didn't see any mistakes and I thought the flow was good. I'm not sure what you were worried about, but I do hope you will update again soon!
person LadyFireCrab
schedule November 20, 2013 at 12:00 AM
So, Draco and Hermione are about the only M/F pairing I actually like, and I've seen a lot of different ways/reasons for them to end up together, but i have to say this is actually one of the most plausible so far. Totally awesome. I really like this story so far and can't wait to see where it goes. :D
schedule November 20, 2013 at 12:00 AM
This is absolutely brilliant, I can't believe I've never stumbled on this fic earlier! I really love the way you've captured all the unique characteristics of each character, especially Draco. Please continue with this fic, it's far too good to be left incomplete, plus, all this UST is driving me nuts, lol. You've got another loyal reader eagerly awaiting the next chapter! :)
person LadyFireCrab
schedule November 20, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Oh! I really hope you update soon, I'm absolutely dying to see what happens next with those two. I love that you didn't tone down Hermione's fire or Draco's deviousness, unlike most who pair the two of them. All I can say is More! More! More!
person rae
schedule November 19, 2013 at 12:00 AM
gah...I adore this chapter. There's something so yum about Draco getting that he's so into her into his brain...