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for Jealousy

by brandnewdaydawning

person Dy
schedule May 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
this so cool!!! i really like the plot!! keep writting please!!! make Ron suffer!! HAHAHA = evil laugh
person Lrnd
schedule May 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I Love Draco, esp. that last line ... v. smooth
person fiona
schedule May 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ooo i love it update soon this should be good!
person Zoe
schedule May 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow! This is amazing! I can\'t wait for the next chapter please wirte soon I might die of suspense!!! ^O^
person greer
schedule May 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM

Looks good so far, can\'t wait to see what is in store!
person bgard
schedule May 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
evil chuckle .. I like where your going with this..
person iheartdraco
schedule May 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
keep writing, i want to hear more, it\'s great!
person ancientgirl
schedule May 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Sounds interesting so far. Please go on.
person merrilinda
schedule May 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
please write more
person auryn
schedule May 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This story is great! Every bit as attention grabbing as Obscurity. You are quickly becoming one of my favorite writers, and I can\'t wait to hear more. You are so good at making your characters sound genuine and believable! The logic you used to make Draco rebel against his father not only kept him in character, but made perfect sense. Keep up the great work, and please update ASAP! I\'ll be sure to keep a look out.