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for Jealousy

by brandnewdaydawning

person harahettamonkeyking
schedule May 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
EEEEK!!
OOMMMIIIGGGGOOODD!!!
U HAVE GOT TO HURRY UP WITH THIS FIC!! ITS HILARIOUS!! I LOVE IT!!!!wow....
the idea isn\'t completely original but i think what makes it so good is the way u right it with humor and slightly realistically unlike other authors who have similar plots and make it full of crappy teenage angst...
This is very yummy.
keep writing!!^_^
~~harahettamonkeyking
person annie
schedule May 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I like the plot. A little bit cliche but you make up for it with your style. Keep on going and I look forward to the next chapter.
person raphaelle
schedule May 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
this looks fun and amusing so far, and i hope you continue it! i suggest, however, that you find a beta, because there are just a few annoying spelling errors (you\'re instead of your) that detract from how enjoyable your story is. otherwise, as i said, i like what you\'ve started and i hope to read more! :)
person devilprincess
schedule May 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow! I loove it! Just update, ok?
schedule May 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG Squeeeeee! I know this is horrible fangirl speak, but it\'s all that comes to my mind right now XD; I simply can\'t think of anything intelligent to say at this moment except UPDATE! And soon!
person duckeyedfool
schedule May 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wicked start, sounds promising, please update soon.
person Tart
schedule May 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Thats a great start! I want more, I want more!
person shayla
schedule May 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Good fic so far! Keep Draco evil. (he is sexiest that way) UPDATE please.
Shayla
person sailormoonhannah
schedule May 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG this is soooooo good!!!! please update soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
person brynna
schedule May 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
lol this is gonna be fun, can\'t wait for the next chapter!!! update soon please.