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for Jealousy

by brandnewdaydawning

person Kahlua
schedule May 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really love your writing. Your Draco is mature, but he\'s still sneaky...still a Slytherin. And I love the idea of this story. Although it\'s nothing new I\'m glad you\'re taking your time to develop it. There are subtle of attraction and trust beginning to form, but Hermione and Draco are not all over each other right away. I love your stories! I hope you continue writing them soon. :)
person STEPHANIE
schedule May 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
GREAT STORY! POST MORE SOON!
person DevilPrincess
schedule May 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG this is sooooo AWESOME!!!!!!!! Just try to update, PLEASE!
person rj black
schedule May 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I NEED more!!! It\'s a fantastic fic. Can\'t wait to see how it will all unravel. lol Good work ;)
person Mdunlap
schedule May 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love this story. I\'ve been looking for an update for a while. There is something delicious about two people having a secret from the whole world.
person sesshy_lover
schedule May 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE THIS STORY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! PLEASEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE UPDATE ASAP!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! OR ILL MURDER MYSELF!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
person jchaser
schedule May 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
What incredible writing! Thought it was JKR herself. Unbelievable. Anyway, love the premise, the dialogue sounds dead on, and cannot wait for your update. Please try soon. Thanks for such an enjoyable read!
person Pixi
schedule May 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
damn... this looks like it could be lotsa fun.
person Lyndie578
schedule May 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yes! Awesome! Go, Hermione (and Draco), go! Please, please author give me some more!
person Jess
schedule May 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i can see it now... this story has great potential... i hope hermione takes draco\'s offer... what am i talking about? of course she will! i love to see these two get together and make ron feel so much jealousy that it will drive him mad *evil grin* please, update soon.