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for Jealousy

by brandnewdaydawning

person Klowe
schedule June 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was such a good fic you are writing more arn\'t you? (Hopefull)
I\'ll put this in my favourites to check back.
Look forward to reading more
PS let Ron get it big time ;)
person trina
schedule June 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMGsh!! this is a really great story. i hope you continue with it! Please update soon!! I can\'t wait to see Ron jealous! Great job.
person elisha
schedule June 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
totally awesome!!! please please update!!!!!
schedule May 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I\'m so happy you updated XD This story is awesome. I just love the interaction between the two. Simply perfect :D Can\'t wait to see more of this fic!
person chick
schedule May 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
UPDATE!
person Pixi
schedule May 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love the premise. The story is good. You have a few grammatical errors that should probably be cleaned up. Grammer Whores like me can\'t help but notice things like your and you\'re. Your = possive. you\'re = contraction = you are. Stuff like that, simple but distracting to the reader.

Otherwise it is a lot of fun. Can\'t wait to see another chapter. Keep up the good work.
person Tithen
schedule May 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great premise! I am intrigued and cannot wait to read more!
person Naria
schedule May 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
THIS STORY IS AWESOME! You have completely captured the Malfoy selfishness and snobiness! ^_^ I can\'t tell you how impressed I am, and how WONDERFUL I find this story! I am SO eager for the next update, and the growth of \'mione\'s and Draco\'s relationship! It\'s so believable! OH MY GOD!! SQUEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!

VICIOUS HERMIONE!!!!!!

And I can\'t tell you how refreshing Draco\'s outlook on Voldy is! IT\'S SO FRICKIN AWESOME!!
person lorett
schedule May 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OH GOD, I\'m SOOOO LOVING this story.

I just did an excited squeak and jump when I saw you updated both of your stories. You\'re fast, FAST becoming one of my favorite AFF authors!

KUDOS to another wonderful chapter.

I noticed a few typos here and there, nothing big, but if you\'d like a beta to just have an extra pair of eyes give it a once over before you post, let me know. I\'d be most happy to help you out. I think you\'re stories are wonderful and I\'d like to help if you\'re interested. Just pop me an email and let me know!

Looking forward to the next chapter.

Cheers,

Lorett

person Alana
schedule May 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow, this is just so damn wicked and so bloody hot! Love the plot, really brilliant if I may say so! Draco being his usually sexy self and Hermione being all her Gryffindorie self.(can I write that?) Anyways, love the story so far, can\'t wait to read some more...plz update soon!!!////Alana