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for Jealousy

by brandnewdaydawning

person Lorena
schedule June 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
please update soon i want to know what happens next
person Thisbe
schedule June 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I luv this fic to pieces! Update soon please!!!
person sullicn
schedule June 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Rain,

I LOVE the story!! I can picture Draco & Hermione starting a relationship this way. His calculating side and her practical one. Can\'t wait for the next update.

sullicn
person bob
schedule June 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
awwwww! It\'s sooo cute!
I totally LOVE this story. I think you have real talent and you should write more so I can bow at your feet and tell you your wonderful. :D
soo please update soon.
-bob
person elisha
schedule June 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
AAAUUGGHHH!!!!!! PLEASE UPDATE!!!! i about died when i saw chapter 3 up, i LOVE your story!!!!!!!!!updateupdateupdateupdateupdateupdateupdateupdate!!!!!!!
person Only Secret
schedule June 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow, great chapter! I especially love your comparison of hermione w/ hagrid and that line about Dragons. it\'s wonderful in the sense of the allusion and well...everything! Update soon! please?
person faunna
schedule June 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
finally! Like I said before....this is a very good story. My only warning..don\'t make Draco into a kitty, he\'s hot \'cause he is bad. so far so good.


Faunna
PS
UPDATE
person LiLiL
schedule June 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Another interesting story from a talant author! I like it. update soon PLZ
person lorett
schedule June 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Rain! - Breezing in and giving you a continental air kiss on both cheeks. (It\'s my new thing, the continental kiss on both cheeks. I\'m liking it!)

Anyway, back to you! WONDERFUL to see you joined the group. I hope you nose around and read some of the stories and jump into the group convos, if that\'s your thing. I\'d love for you to add some of your favorite stories too!

Now, about the chappie:

GAW! You tease! I want more Draco/Hermione interaction! But, I get the establishing of Harry being on Hermione\'s side. At least for the moment anyway, right? Nice job.

And oh, how I loved the last line...\'It\'s not so bad when you have someone to hold onto!\' Now if that\'s not an uderstatement, I don\'t know what is! Draco Malfoy, on a broom, your arms wrapped tightly around him (like a ribbon....LOVED THAT) and at sunset, no less....smelling devine....Oh Lordie, I\'m drifting off to my happy place....

Okay, I\'m back. SIGH - That was fun.

MORE. I demand more! Quickly! I\'m hooked!

PS - glad to see you\'re reading Keys....And don\'t you fret, the whole things about Draco. GOD how I ADORE Draco. Anyway, nice to hear from you over there, looking forward to hearing what you think of the story. Take a peek at \"IT HAD TO BE YOU\" too. I think you may like it!

MWAP!

Lorett
person ~Kat~
schedule June 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really like this fic. please update soon!!! I can\'t wait to see what happens next... I need more