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Oh, that Ron is really an ass. I hope you let Draco kick his butt! lol I loved the chap! Most excellent. Please update soon!

Ok, chapter 1 was fantastic! I already love your Draco and your Hermione! Their conversation was spot on. I loved how you ended the chapter...mostly because I know there are more to follow! That said...I\'m eagerly skipping off to read the next one...

OK, Rain dear, Chapter 2 was delicious! I loved the haggling of the details of the bargain, and the scene at dinner. \"Come fly with me.\" Sigh...I\'d be hopping on that broom in a heartbeat! The thought of being in Draco\'s arms on a broom, watching the sunset. MMMMMmmmm...

Sorry, my mind kinda meandered over to the gutter for a while there, but I\'m back now! This story is delightful!

And now I\'m off to read Chapter 3! (sprints to Chappie 3 in keen anticipation...)

I\'m done with Chapter 3. I\'m so sad. No, not that the chapter was sad (it was great, but more about that later) but it\'s just that there are no more chapters after it. Wahhhh! OK, I busted up at Draco\'s thought that he would just have to set Hermione down and touch her till she got used to it. I\'m like, yeah, right, like you are gonna just hate that, aren\'t you, Draco my lad? What a shame...LOL!

And Harry\'s line about Hermione being like Hagrid, and that dragons don\'t make good pets...brilliant! I loved it.

So now...now what do I do? I\'ll just sit here and twiddle my thumbs and wait for you to update this fabulous story. (twiddle, twiddle, twiddle...) Well...where\'s my update? I should warn you I can be quite impatient. Just ask Lorett! La dee dah, la dee dah, dee dah, dee dah, dee dah dah dah... still waiting... (taps foot impatiently)

Humph... I guess I\'ll go sulk somewhere until the next chapter then. Be sure to put a message up at Lorett\'s group when you do! I\'m looking forward to it.
Ronnie

Great story so far! I\'d like to see what twists this story takes (There are going to be some, right?). I like that the reasoning behind the situation makes sense. And you didn\'t just make it happen as if it was a perfectly natural thing to do. Very well thought out. Please update soon!

I love both of your D/Hr fics so much, they are absolutely excellent, they are without a doubt two of my faves at the moment.

I have been meanng to review them for so long but RL has been so hectic that I have only had chance to read then run lol but I thought it was about time I reviewed so think of this as a review for both Obscurity and Jealousy.

I love the Draco you portray in them both, he fits in perfectly with the storylines you are using which are wicked by the way :D I have seen the storyline of Draco making a deal with Hermione to pretend to be a couple before but not as good as the way you are writing it. And as for Draco being Hermione\'s black night watching over her in Obscurity, all I can say about that is *swoon*

There is so much I could say about both fics but they ultimately lead to the word excellent, so instead of hearing me babble on I will leave it at that :D EXCELLENT!

I am enthralled with both stories and I am so glad you are having a go and enjoying being a D/Hr shipper, you write them so well and I\'m looking forward to reading more, hopefully very soon!

Cat xxx

ooooo please please please update!

i absolutely LOVE your story. perfect plot!!!! i can\'t wait to see wat else happens, how ron reacts, if anything blossoms btwn hermione and draco!!!!! OMG, for reals, i really love this story and i can\'t wait until the nexzt update!

Wow, I love everything about this story. For some reason I really enjoy what a large part school gossip plays in it. Honestly, I think many stories stray away from the fact that they are still teenagers, and the rumor mill is such a prominent part of life during that age, regardless whether or not you participate. Well, I suppose it is at any age, but never so much as in those years. There is no doubt that both Draco and Hermione have made quite a name for themselves at Hogwarts over the years, and I love the way thay you emphasize their fame with the third year calling them \"The Draco Malfoy and The Hermione Granger.\" They are very likely targets for such gossip, and anyone who has been under the eye of scrutiny could understand what would make Hermione accept Draco\'s offer. A sad but true fact of life.

I love your story, and I can\'t wait for more! You are such a great writer, I just adore you!!!

This is a really nice story and I would love to see it continued.

Jia Ren Qu@ff.net