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for Jealousy

by brandnewdaydawning

person Sophie
schedule June 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Fantastic! Draco... *drools* and go Hermione! Try and write more!
person kat701
schedule June 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Love it! LOVE IT! Cannot wait for more! :P
person elisha
schedule June 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!!!!!! I was so totally STOKED when i saw that you put up chapter 4!!!!! amazing work, i can\'t wait until they \"discuss\" their arrangement, *grins evily*, so please update update update soon!!!!!!!!!!!
person lorett
schedule June 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey Darlin!

Okay, so there were LOTS of fun quotes in this chappie that I just LOVED!

The first:

\'She might be able to fool Ron, and maybe even Harry, but Ginny was in a completely different league when it came to ferreting out the truth. No pun intended.\'

No pun intended...Hilarious!

The next ones, my favorite, actually:

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person Jade
schedule June 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
heya! do update soon. and would mind informing me when you have a new chapter available? pretty please? ^^ i included my email chapter.. :D

i really love this , by the way. :D
person leanansidhe
schedule June 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is really fun. I think I may even like this better than Obscurity. I see alot of directions this could take and am anxious to see what you have planned. The dialogue is perfect. I think your portrayal of Ron is spot-on too (I\'ve never been a big fan of him). I like that Harry is supportive of Hermione, if not exactly the situation she\'s putting herself in. All things considered, totally believable. Hope you update soon.
person Kit
schedule June 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love this story! I can\'t wait until you update!
person matches
schedule June 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
mmm it was yummy!
person Michelle
schedule June 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I\'ll be honest, the only reason I even gave this story a chance was because I loved obscurity. The summary for the story sucked, but....the story is awesome! Like, in some aspects the plot is similar to other fics, but this one is unique because of your writing style. It is a great story and I can\'t wait for the next update for both of your fics! EXCELLENT WORK!
person Natalie (natyslacks)
schedule June 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*Girly squeal* Awwwww so Kwaii!! I love how you\'ve started this and I\'m in egar anticipation to see how you continue it! *Is all excited* ^.^ Please update this smexy story soon ;D.
Luv Naty