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for Jealousy

by brandnewdaydawning

person dragon34
schedule June 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I hope you continue with this story, I reallt like it when Hermione tells either Ron or Harry off, and puts them in their place
person Megan
schedule June 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG this fic is awesome! I love the way you write, its so refreshing from the some of the other stories that are out there. The plot is great too. Please update soon :-)
person Sakurashope7
schedule June 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
PLEASE REVIEW You are doing such a great job!!!!! Update soon!!!! Please
person RahNee
schedule June 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh my goodness! I got to the end of chapter 4 and cried out, sobbing, \"NO NO NO it can\'t be over! I must have more!\" So let that be my only complaint...too damned short! And you can\'t just tantalize me with that little tidbit and then dangle a cliffie at me! What will happen in the old charms classroom??? OK, I realize that that could be considered two complaints...I stand corrected.

I am a huge sucker for metaphors and I found this one particularly lovely: the one about her smile disappearing \"like chalk in the rain.\" Loved it!

Ha ha! I laughed aloud at this line: \"He could even sneer in an undertone.\" Whee! What a great line.

YOU MUST WRITE MORE! Seriously. I am not kidding. I am sitting here, waiting for you to update. My child will likely not be fed because I will be sitting staring at this computer WAITING for an update. You wouldn\'t want the guilt of a starving 7 year old on your conscience, would you? I didn\'t think so. So hop to it, missy!

Sorry, I can be rather demanding and impatient...just ask Lorett! Kindly ignore that last outburst from me. I\'ll try to control myself better. Really.

(Gasping for breath) Must. Have. Update. Soon....

Ronnie
person dryhgd
schedule June 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
really goodm story...update soon
person curlyq2713
schedule June 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ooh this story is very interesting. why is hermione so freakin uptight? she agreed with their little plan, didn\'t she? hehe, update sooon pleeeaaaase :-)
person Rachel
schedule June 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
SO GOOD!!!!!!! Please review really really really soon!!!!!! It is so breathtaking!!!!!!!
Great Job!!!! Keep up the good work!!!!
person PureBloodAzn
schedule June 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow, that was ...BEYOND GOOD. Please write some more!
person Alana
schedule June 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh, man! This chapter was so funny, espacially when Draco invaded Hermione\'s personal space in the library. lol. And I just loved the part in the owlery when Hermione totally kicked Ron\'s ass(I mean, when she gave him a piece of her mind)LOL! And when they got caught by Snape, that was so fucking brilliant, ohh sorry!
Plz update soon....
Alana
person JeremySumpter
schedule June 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
It\'s a good plot. I like it. Keep up the good work!